wow i really like this, i think you've characterised selphie really well!!

;_; I love how you write from Selphie's point of view and capture her personality perfectly. Sad, but bright in a Selphie way too.

Wow, you've got Selphie's character down to a tee. It was so sad but sort of happy at the same time.

Selphie was my favourite character, I kept a save file just before the Trabia scene and followed Selphie around each time I watched it.
It was so depressing!
Anyway, I totally loved it and faved it!

this story is absolutely spectacular.

i love the way you wrote everything, the way you described stuff... it just sounds like poetry. it's beautiful.

A lovely insight to Selphie, and her much-underrated sense (and past) of being much more complex than someone who's just there to smile and go along with the other protagonists. :)

Excellent. Beautiful. I'm running out of adjectives!

:D