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EmmettMcFly55
2008-01-02 . chapter 27
Hey, I've red your talking on a forum with this Phish Tacko guy. If you feel bothered 'cause of my outburst when Calvin got tickled - I'm sorry. I didn't mean it that way, just that you should think more about how it is like, but not that you should think that I'd immedeately react when you write a tickle story, or get angry on you. Maybe you can write a story about the tickle victims getting back on their ticklers? Through some future device that makes people ticklish for two hours, maybe? Write me when you've made up your mind.

PS: I never found out what was so funny about tickling that people'd like to do it for two hours. I'd get tired, or bored. If they love the sound of the laughter, why don't they set it on a tape, so the victims don't have to be bothered anymore?
EmmettMcFly55
2007-12-07 . chapter 24
What a sad story! Poor Calvin tortured like that! That Stacy might be even worse than the Tannen's! I know how it is like being tickled. Not on my feet, but else. It's horrible. The only thing you want is stop it. Why didn't you make a good end and let Doc came to rescue Calvin - and killing Stacy in the process? I HATE HER! She's like... she's so horrible there's nothing I can compare her with. I DETEST HER!

Sorry for getting to over-reacted. I just found it a sad story. I still love you as a writer, but you must know how much pain you do those poor characters with your tickle-stories! I'm almost crying because of they're so sad. Sorry.

Well, it's a good chapter anyway, if you look at how it's written. Again, sorry-for getting too angry. I just find Calvin doesn't deserve that. He always tries to be nice to everyone, like his twin...doesn't he?
EmmettMcFly55
2007-12-07 . chapter 30
Hi Bttf4!

Another great story, however I think it's a little strange to have a story out of another universe being the longest - I think a Trilogy Universe Story would be more normal being the longest. But that's my opinion.

Are you planning to make stories like this about the Parker Universe and the Twin Pines Universe also? It's so sad you mentioned in "A Ticket To The Movies" Twin Pines Doc dismantled the time machine. Maybe you can make a story about Marty Jr and Marlene from 2015 finding the notes about time travel and making a new one, and then go visit their parents in 1985? I'd love that story!

Emmett McFly 55.
Phish Tacko
2007-11-28 . chapter 30
DOES MARTY LIKE CAPS LOCK? I LIKE CAPS LOCK! GOOD STORY! KEEP IT GOING!
Phish Tacko
2007-11-28 . chapter 27
Keep it goin'.
D.J. Scales
2007-11-28 . chapter 30
Hopefully you remembered to make punctuality a lesson to be learned here.
Phish Tacko
2007-11-27 . chapter 26
When are the twins going back to- oh, wait, that's right! I forgot about that!
Phish Tacko
2007-11-26 . chapter 25
Keep it goin'.
D.J. Scales
2007-11-26 . chapter 25
I thought Marty and his son were in deep trouble back in Time Switched.
D.J. Scales
2007-11-25 . chapter 24
Well lets just say that the Doc really got the boys in deep trouble this time.
Phish Tacko
2007-11-25 . chapter 23
Wow, you been BUSY!
Phish Tacko
2007-11-25 . chapter 24
Yay! Tickle fun!
Phish Tacko
2007-11-21 . chapter 17
KEEP GOING!1oneoneoneoneoneoneoneone
Freebird87
2007-11-21 . chapter 17
Is Dr. Wilkins a witch like his mom?
D.J. Scales
2007-11-21 . chapter 17
Well that went pretty well actually.
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