 tomorrow4eva 2008-02-26 . chapter 8Sorry to hear about your writer's block. Enjoyed the chapter. It's good to see Arcee and Sunstreaker making contact with the other Autobots. |
 Elita One 2008-02-25 . chapter 8ohh man if Optimus is missing then their screwed |
 LoveHopes 2008-01-06 . chapter 7Love this chap :D Excellent job!! I wonder what this surprise is that the 'cons are making?! 0_o |
 tomorrow4eva 2007-12-19 . chapter 7I love the myriad plot threads. They add to the excitement. Which is plentiful! I'm glad the Autobots aren't the only ones with problems: Barricade is in a very sticky spot. Kudos for involving Sunstreaker but not Sideswipe. They can exist separately, and I think it gives them time to 'shine' when they're not with the other one. I like the way you are characterising people. The whole story has a bit of the old cartoon feel.
I remember you didn't like my review of chapter 1. I'd just like to say I'm very glad I've stuck with your story. It's very enjoyable.
Hooray for Stunticons! |
 blood shifter 2007-12-19 . chapter 7man, i just can't figure out what you're planning. you're doing this story so well. awesome chapter. keep going. |
 Xeno the Hedgehog 2007-12-10 . chapter 6correct me if I'm wrong, but wouldn't it be more in character for Sam to insist that Bumblebee join them? |
 LoveHopes 2007-11-26 . chapter 6I think you should have had Bee lubricate on him again. Well I like, and I agree with you Simmons needs to be thought a lesson... permanently *evil smirk* oh the things I can think of. I can't even imagine what the Pentagon wants with Sam and Mikaela? Guess I'll just have to wait and see :D |
 Bluebird Soaring 2007-11-23 . chapter 6I had to laugh at Arcee saying she would stomp on them =) More fun soon I hope =) |
 Heartless-Jazz 2007-11-23 . chapter 6awesome chapter more soon pleaz |
 blood shifter 2007-11-23 . chapter 6this story is hard to keep up with when all these bots are coming in. but it makes it so much cooler. please continue on with it. update again soon. |
 tomorrow4eva 2007-11-20 . chapter 5Autobots in convoy! The best way to travel.
Your second section has 'Lennonx' several times, and Simmons should say 'Apparently'.
I think 'quardinance' should be 'coordinates'.
Hooray for re-using the Constructicon names for the correct robots! And double hooray for Prowl vs Barricade! And their snarky starter comments. I like your dialogue for Prowl. I think you're doing okay with Barricade's personality (mind you, I haven't read Ghosts either, so I wouldn't know). |
 Shini-666 2007-11-19 . chapter 1Me likes! Great idea for Arcee and Mikaela...^_^ |
 LoveHopes 2007-11-19 . chapter 5It's all good ^^ the good cop is gonna win, cause he is cooler :D Good chap though I'm a little worried about Ratchet... 0_o |
 blood shifter 2007-11-19 . chapter 5well. this will be interesting next chapter. keep it up. |
 LoveHopes 2007-11-17 . chapter 4IronHide is gonna get kidnapped isn't he? I wonder what the Decepicons are doing...? :D |