hi hope u are not finished with it yet!! i want to see what happens

Danny and Sam are sweet, it would take more than a plate of cheese to ruin their evening especially as Danny can use intangibility to clean her up. I'm desperately curious about the alternate timeline Dannys you're hinting about. Apart from Danny and Dark Dan I wonder how many Dannys there will be?

Oh and I'm really glad I'm not the only one reviewing any more 'cause this story is really good.

So Paulina knows Danny's secret? (I haven't seen the show in quite a while, and am a little dense anyway.) Did he just propose to Sam, or was it more of a friendship ring?

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Good sisterly bonding. It helps set up the conflicts to come, and give it an emotional impact.

Clever con, though calling it just a con undersells the danger. Now he invokes a rather dangerous set of ghosts. Wonder who they'll be after?

Very clever use of the ghosts with the runaway asteroid. (Calling it disasteroid was also good.) Good introduction of Danielle to the family. Jack is a little smarter here.

Awwe that was sweet. I think it might be hard for Jazz to put her analyst instincts on hold and not ask "how do you feel?" all the time.

But after watching her around Danny after she found out his secret she is unexpectedly good at giving people their space. please update soon I really am enjoying this

Wow, the idea of Freakshow commanding Clockwork sends shivers down my spine.
I think Freakshow would be one of the hardest characters to write because his rhythm of speech is so strange. So far you're doing really well. I don't see him doing the televangelist bit in his ringmaster clothes though.
Can't wait for the next chapter!

Good beginning but I'm itching for the action to start. It's great that your setting this post PP. Hope you update soon.