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| Silver Souhait 2007-12-23 ch 1, | abuseWow...so deep...so sad...aw... That was a really nice detail, too, about how he wouldn't even be able to visit a grave. In the second part, the longest paragraph-did you mean "tripped" where you typed "dripped" instead? That confused me for a second... |
| seo-chan 2007-11-09 ch 1, anon. | abuselove the analyzation behind the episodes; i still havn't seen the movie YET! D: |
| Tears of Eternal Darkness 2007-11-01 ch 1, | abusewow, that was a really powerful parental RoyEd war piece. you are such a great author! keep it up! =^-^= |
| xfacexthisx 2007-11-01 ch 1, | abuseThat was really sad and sweet. It was good though. |
| edPod 2007-11-01 ch 1, | abuseI hate war too. They didn't actually tell everyone that Ed died tripping over a rock, did they? 'cause that's messed up. |
| jenelric 2007-11-01 ch 1, | abuseAw - oh my gosh! That was so sad! Very well done though! I always wanted to see Mustang's first reaction to Ed's disappearance. You've provided me with at least a good idea of how it really would have gone! ^^ yay!! I'm so glad! Awesome job! |
| Cold-Foxx 2007-11-01 ch 1, | abusePoor Roy. I love fics portraying Roy's emotions about Ed after the series. Riza, too. Great job! |
| Stratagem 2007-11-01 ch 1, | abuseParental!RoyEd is so sweet. This one was bittersweet; love can really hurt people. Aww. But I really enjoyed it; it was quite well written. |
| Syolen 2007-11-01 ch 1, | abuseThat's so sad ! But it's really good :) |
| Sousukes-Girl 2007-11-01 ch 1, | abuseHey, I like it. you're grammar/spelling is getting better as well! Too sad, but hey, that's how things are. I love your Parental Fictions between Roy and Ed. Sg |
| Harryswoman 2007-11-01 ch 1, | abuseaw! that's so sad! but it was really good too! |
| NoOneCatchMe 2007-11-01 ch 1, | abuseAw! Poor Roy. That was really well writen, I liked it :D |