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Reviews For: Farewell

Silver Souhait
2007-12-23
ch 1,
abuseWow...so deep...so sad...aw...

That was a really nice detail, too, about how he wouldn't even be able to visit a grave.

In the second part, the longest paragraph-did you mean "tripped" where you typed "dripped" instead? That confused me for a second...
seo-chan
2007-11-09
ch 1, anon.
abuselove the analyzation behind the episodes;
i still havn't seen the movie YET! D:
Tears of Eternal Darkness
2007-11-01
ch 1,
abusewow, that was a really powerful parental RoyEd war piece. you are such a great author! keep it up!
=^-^=
xfacexthisx
2007-11-01
ch 1,
abuseThat was really sad and sweet.
It was good though.
edPod
2007-11-01
ch 1,
abuseI hate war too. They didn't actually tell everyone that Ed died tripping over a rock, did they? 'cause that's messed up.
jenelric
2007-11-01
ch 1,
abuseAw - oh my gosh! That was so sad! Very well done though!

I always wanted to see Mustang's first reaction to Ed's disappearance. You've provided me with at least a good idea of how it really would have gone! ^^ yay!! I'm so glad!

Awesome job!
Cold-Foxx
2007-11-01
ch 1,
abusePoor Roy. I love fics portraying Roy's emotions about Ed after the series. Riza, too.

Great job!
Stratagem
2007-11-01
ch 1,
abuseParental!RoyEd is so sweet. This one was bittersweet; love can really hurt people. Aww. But I really enjoyed it; it was quite well written.
Syolen
2007-11-01
ch 1,
abuseThat's so sad ! But it's really good :)
Sousukes-Girl
2007-11-01
ch 1,
abuseHey, I like it. you're grammar/spelling is getting better as well! Too sad, but hey, that's how things are.

I love your Parental Fictions between Roy and Ed.

Sg
Harryswoman
2007-11-01
ch 1,
abuseaw! that's so sad! but it was really good too!
NoOneCatchMe
2007-11-01
ch 1,
abuseAw! Poor Roy. That was really well writen, I liked it :D
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