 sparkysparkyboomgirl 2007-11-03 . chapter 1Awwe! It was so sad at the begining but the it got so sweet! let me give you one of my world famous analogies (sp, i know)
this sotry was like...english tea ! first it bitter and sad, but then it gets sweet and soothing! Yep. any way, i loved it! the end was the best for me. i never even thought about TY Lee and her maybe being able to heal Teo! it may not happen in the show but rly creative. + yay the discovery of a new ship!! TophxHaru!! |
 Therese Delacoeur 2007-11-01 . chapter 1*sighs* I love Kataangs with happy endings... It makes me really, well, happy!
I might've shortened the song to just include the bits you really needed, but it was a nice choice for the story. I'm thrilled that you decided to use Zuko as a good guy! That was really awesome. Usually it's a grudging, "Well, fine!" kind of attitude on his part, but it was nice to see him more amenable to acts of kindness.
Again, nice job! ~Therese |