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Reviews For: The Renovation Project

tasneem
2008-06-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseHello,
I really enjoyed reading your short story. Are you planning on extending it to become a Snape/Granger ficlet in the future?
Best
T
Cheshire
2008-05-24
ch 1, anon.
abuseSnape did deserve to live a different life than canon. Your way of bringing it about is unique, as the portraits are the ones planning it. Using Hermione was amusing.

I enjoyed reading this.
HappeeGoLuckee
2008-01-08
ch 1,
abuseThis was well-written and I quite enjoyed reading it.
stars-n-moons91
2007-11-03
ch 1,
abuseVery good. Nice to read another of your stories.

How did you feel about DH? I was disappointed a bit, but at least I have answered questions and some closure.

Stars
sunsethill
2007-11-02
ch 1,
abuseI left a more substantive review on your LJ following the link from Snape After DH. I am greatly looking forward to how you continue this great story. I so glad that you found a way for all those Slytherins to save Severus, since his creator was going for pathos. I want to see Hermione continue to deal with all those Slytherins in the future.
Chanteur d'ombre
2007-11-02
ch 1,
abuseWonderfully done.
amsev
2007-11-01
ch 1,
abuseI don't suppose you'd consider continuing this wonderful one-shot starting with the protagonists a couple of years down the road (and ignore what transpired in EWE)?
excessivelyperky
2007-11-01
ch 1,
abuseGood! Hermione ought to feel ashamed; I don't expect anything out of the boys, and never did, but Hermione ought to have known better, and done better. (then again, she ought to have been ashamed in the fifth and sixth books, too, but wasn't--and lost any moral high ground to use on the boys, either).

Very good story!
MarbleGlove
2007-11-01
ch 1,
abuseFabulous. And utterly believable. The rescue was slipped in so smoothly that it just fits with both characters and plotline. Plus, that letter was hilarious. Ah, Snape, such a bastard to the very end. And I loved the conversation between Phineas and Hermione. It was a lovely little bit of thumbing their nose at Dumbledore who really deserved it.
NaginiFay
2007-11-01
ch 1,
abuseI like this a lot!
duj
2007-11-01
ch 1,
abuseExcellent original rescue-fic, although I'm not convinced Hermione would wibble to the point of hesitation about closing the wound. She had to fix Ron's arm after she splinched him and close Harry's bite wound after Godric's Hollow.
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