 Felix the Eeveetrainer 2008-03-20 . chapter 6Nice so far.
Es ESP Espeon!
(I LOVE Espeons!)
Yes, i'm insane. |
 Juptile 2008-03-17 . chapter 6Oops, the illusion has been found! Although Lugia isn't the only psychic-type legendary - maybe there's another helping out!
I look forward to updates! |
 Juptile 2008-03-17 . chapter 5Nice bonding session. *reads on*
(Sorry if these reviews are a bit short, but I find it hard to stretch out points.) |
 Juptile 2008-03-17 . chapter 4Too little, too late, it seems. And how did Team Rocket find their hideout?! *reads on* |
 Juptile 2008-03-17 . chapter 3Wow, the Pokemon and the legendaries sure are organised! |
 Juptile 2008-03-17 . chapter 2Looks like Lugia didn't waste time in getting the army back together again!
I wonder how they'll react when Umbreon and his sister eventually find each other again, though. |
 Juptile 2008-03-17 . chapter 1Looks like Espeon has given been given some authority, and I'm looking forward to this story
*reads on* |
 DW-Chaos WolfEdge 2008-02-06 . chapter 6Oh, great. They've been discovered. This could mean trouble... The Rocket's are crazy enough, and it seems like their Pokemon aren't that different.
Although, the Rocket Pokemon do seem like a pretty interesting bunch. They call Houndour newbie, which I think is funny. Mutt sounds like someone who'd simply annoy me to death but is also funny, and Duke sounds sorta strict, but okay, I guess. Even thought they're with Team Rocket, I guess everyone's gotta belong somewhere.
I'm glad to see Houndour's okay, but I wonder how he became involved with Team Rocket? Perhaps he became side-tracked in his mission to find Virus...
Well, I definitely want to find out what happens next, but seeing as how I've caught up, guess I'm waiting. Twas a good chapter, so till next time, later and update soon! |
 DW-Chaos WolfEdge 2008-01-20 . chapter 5I think I can! ...Though, it'd be easier if I had a better memory... I'm certain this was like the chapter when Espeon talked with Umbreon in The Under, right? I may re-read that chapter as I can hardly remember anything about it... I miss The Under.. you probably know already, but it's gone in XD. But now, I digress.
This was a nice chapter; Espeon and Sassy are a bit closer than before. And Waterlogs collection of stuff he saves seems interesting... a bunch of keepsakes...I like collecting things too, but then they always seem to end up scattered around my room somehow, and make my Mom complain about it being messy...
Well, since this chapter is over, it's on to the next. Which reminds me... I thought I read all the chapters thus far, but then you updated with chapter six and I realized I was one behind... Ah, well. More to read later! As always, update soon! |
 Cem-chan 2008-01-12 . chapter 6YAY an Update. Houndour is with Team Rocket. No he's just looking for Virus right? (I know he was part of Snaggem once but still) Oh yeah will that evil Jolteon make an appearence?Growlie and the others appear soon right? Right?
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
 DW-Chaos WolfEdge 2007-12-25 . chapter 4Oh boy, what have Team Rocket done this time...? They decided to come out and play with bombs and nets. Sounds like fun.
Grunts are a nuisance.
Things went hectic. Entie and Raiku got into an argument you would want to stay a couple of miles away from, and now they've been captured in nets. It's still too hard to choose a side on their views, though. To attack or not to attack, it was, but I don't think that matters anymore...
At least Espeon and Sassy escaped... but now I wonder what is this place Sassy is taking Espoen...? And now what's going to happen to the Free World Army? I was beginning to get used to politics... Well, I hope we find out soon. Twas a good chapter! Oh, and it's the 25th, so share the eggnog and Merry Christmas! |
 Cem-chan 2007-11-25 . chapter 5Oh I can this is like that chapter where I guess Espeon realized her feelings for Umbreon while they were in the Under. Please tell me thats right. And Suicune? Dolls? Posters? Why am I getting a Lorelei from FRLG flashback (do u have either game? If yes or no there's a house on 4 island with a lot of dolls. And its Lorelei's)
Update soon. And well I may have been away but I still got the first review on your 2 new chappies. Somehow that makes me mad that no one else reviews this perfectly good story |
 Cem-chan 2007-11-25 . chapter 4No legendaries have been kidnapped (BTW I just gotback. Please don't ask me about the vacation because my plane back was delayed for like 24 hours and at the stupid hotel they ran out of rooms right when we arrived so we camped out in their lobby on beach chairs). Oh and this chapter is awsome as usual. But um is Raiku a nickname because I think Raiku is really spelled Raikou. If I'm wrong nevermind |
 DW-Chaos WolfEdge 2007-11-22 . chapter 3Okay, she's looked into the future, and I guess not too far, so what was Houndour doing there? Could that mean he's with Snagem again? And what about the Pokemon of the Free World Army? I didn't know everyone took a paid vacation!
Ridgid needs to work on his people(Pokemon) skills... And Entie and Raiku are a funny pair. And finally, We hear Lugia speak! (This is the first time he's talked, isn't it?) Well, from what's happened so far, I don't know whether Entie's or Raiku's plan would be better... I still can't decide on what I would vote to do, if I were there... Okay, I want to know what happens next now.
Anyway, it's Thanksgiving break, so hopefully, I'll be able to review for chapter 4 today, as well. laters! |
 DW-Chaos WolfEdge 2007-11-16 . chapter 2Finally, I review! Took me long enough... I was beginning to think free time was something completely beyond my reach.
Anyway, I like Suicune's new name! Old Waterlogs sounds just plain funny when used for a legendary Pokemon. Can't wait till he comes back, and hopefully with the others.
So, Sassy's Umbreon's brother... I wonder if they'll be reunited soon...? In fact, I wonder when everyone will be reunited. I'm beginning to miss Growlie, Umbreon and everyone else... Though I have no idea what happened to Houndour...
Espeon has joined the army! But what they're planning to do, and can do not but guess. If Viridian City's still occupied with humans... I think they may want to see what goes on in the Viridian Forest nowadays.
Regardlessly, it looks like we are soon to find out what the warlord wants with Espeon... The countless, irrelevant reasons I can think of right away are most likely not what Lugia has in mind; since I'm pretty sure a game of chess is out of the question...
Though you've already updated, I can't wait to read the next chapter, as it will probably be some time before I have spare time to read it. (Tomorrow's Saturday!) Until then, laters. |
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