keep writing because i believe it will turn out to be a real good story.
yay they would be my comfort objects too.
maybe different music though LOL
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the storyline is pretty great. Can't wait to hear how you continue it.

I like your story but I think you should make the caps longer.

please update soon! Thanks!

i really like this story so far. Yeah it has a similar modern plot on P&P but I really like it. I'm still reading...

Please update soon! Thanks!

A superb chapter!
Update soon.

I'd quite like to inflict pain on you for butchering the english language! The storyline is unusual and interesting, but you really need to spend a wee bit of time looking at grammar and puctuation.
Also, don't be in such a rush to move the story on. Your speed makes it disjointed and rather strange. The story itself lacks the necessary background and detail to add depth to your characters, which is a shame because it has the potential to be so much more.
Have you a beta? Using one might help. Good luck.

A great story!
Update soon.

lol at least this review will put you into double figures...
I like this story, this was a good fill in chapter, update soon please thanks :0)

well I like this there a few spelling mistakes here and there but i know what you meant.

SO no writers block yet i hope or anything that will make you busy and prevent you from writing

O Fun! i like it! continue!

oh i love the hot headed Lizzy, proud Darcy, this story is great so far can't wait to read more update soon please :0)

Well, up until you had to bring Caroline it, I was right there with you. I really like your Lizzy, but it sounds like she's going a bit off the handle. Why doesn't she like "these kinds of cases?" Wish your Darcy could be nicer, but I guess that's what your story is about.

Please keep posting!

Best,

MAB

Cool story thus far, update soon please :0)

This has me hooked. I hope that the updateds are long and fast. I like the changes, but that their still all there.