 monkeyman2092 2008-11-23 . chapter 1HAHA!! LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL(5 hours later...)LOLOLOL!! Okay, that was great!! |
 ShadowFox0324 2007-11-01 . chapter 1Hhahaahahahahahahahahahaha!That's messed up! Hahahah! I would so love to see that be made into an episode! Oh man. That was gr8 d-tect. |
 Aleria16 2007-11-01 . chapter 1I like it, i was laughing, and sorry but i cant rhyme it comes out weired and it always about death, but no ur poem is really cool. |
 Redfox50 2007-11-01 . chapter 1Poor Naruto.He really shouldnt have wrote that.Well,good story ^^ |
 Japaneseprincess11 2007-11-01 . chapter 1oh snap this is so funny |