... I thought it was alright

This was pretty sick, and really dark... Poor Sakura! Unless, she also loves him as well, then I guess that's alright... :/
You should make a sequel in which Sakura tries to get away from Sasori. That would be very interesting to read

I really like how this story is written!

It's very..."interesting" and engaging to read. :)

Although both characters may be out of character, this story makes it seem like their personalities really are like this.

Awesome job!

"To smell the aroma around us when we finish having sex" *nosebleed* ** dammit Sasori!

This was dark, was it not?

that was funny and romantic at the same time. AMAZING! i love your stories. im eagerly awaiting the 7th chapter of the present!

I love it ! :D

This is very well written and creative...not to mention erotic.

i lIKE tHIS oNE a lOT iT wAS a vERY fUN rEAD! yAY sASO X sAKU!

I loved this :D It's so hard to find SasoSaku fics, and this one was truely amazing.

that was actually very poetic, nice job

That. Was. Wonderful.

Ahahahhahahahahahahah! God that was so cool, you really did your homework. That was an excellent one shot! Sasori is very dark...

mushi

That was great! I loved it and I think you captured Sasori's personality well so I don't think it was sick.

yeah this was messed up.

but it was actually an interesting mindset from all the sap of sasosak fanfiction, since sasori's nutter than a bestybug...

still good motion but hmm...is there more?