That was a really well-written story. Your characterisations were brilliant. The only thing I noticed was that the age-gap should have been a year or two smaller; I remember reading before that Tonks was in her seventh year at Hogwarts when Draco was in first year.

They were unabashedly bright and beautiful, and no matter how hard you tried, a rainbow couldn’t be touched. This bothered Draco, and his young mind couldn’t comprehend why a rainbow got to be special enough to gaze upon the world from so high above and never need to join in.

I absolutely loved all the rainbow imagery (these lines and the last one, too, and the comparison with Tonks). This was original and lovely. Great job, Huffie!
- Gaby

Oh, this is a great fic! Can I chase rainbows with Remus?

lol, Draco can't comprehend anything!

Your portrayal of Tonks was amazing, especially as we don't know much about her as a teen. Draco was really good, too. Reading this helped me understand him better. And the ending was absolutely amazing.
-Alli

Whoo!

This is extremely well-written, Huffle. I sometimes think that the hastily written oneshots are the best. Awesome!

And now, Ariana, Sirius, Remus and I are off to chase some rainbows. ;)

Hokay then, I'm chasing a rainbow with Sirius and Lupin and Snape :3

NOT Lily. Hush. ¬_¬

I really, really love this. I like the idea that Draco has met Tonks before...

Tonks actually sounded like you. Like, the way you wrote her in, it's obviously HER character, but she reminded me of you.

Yeah, the way you write this stuff is excellento. Well done.

:3

Wow. That was amazing. I really love how you made Draco so young and innocent; it was brilliant!

Oh my goodness Huffie, this was...well this w a s draco, if you see what i mean. not the snivelly draco, but the real draco...a contemplative little bugger who is so protected yet willing to venture out.

Andy was my favorite though, she always will be when you're writing...she was just fantastic in this...I could see her glaring at me and i was hit with the impulse to run.

Anyway, fantastic job.

Paddy

I choose... hmph. I can't decide between my current character in mind (Narcissa) or the longlasting Lily who is annoying me greatly.
I guess Lily, she's so much nicer xD unless I was impersonating Draco and she believed it...
And I need to interview Lily. I have to understand her personality! (haha finally admitting it. ahh! it's a public review.. ohwell xD)

okay back to the review: I already did this in the RL xP
anyway, it's a beautiful piece with wonderful descriptions - fits Draco (and Tonks) characters very well :) I love Tonks' hair!!
a.N

WOW! That second-to-last line was really amazing, I felt it really showed the complete ignorance of a stuck-up pureblood perfectly. Btw, have you read 'Hello, Princess' by DeepDownSlytherin? ^_^ If not, you should. (Everyone should!)
You could totally develope this into a longer dark fic about Draco wanting to her hurt her (Tonks), because she's the closest he could find to something he can never hurt... :)

Oh I like this one, it's odd to think of Draco as a child but I definitely like it.
So are you gonna arrange for me to go rainbow chasing with Harry or possibly a younger James then? Lol xx

Oh wow...this is so amazing and touching. I loved the fact that he saw the rainbow in Tonks, and they were both untouchable. Its amazing!

Wow, this was remarkable. I loved Tonks and even felt a bit sorry for Draco, which really is remarkable because he usually annoys the *!?*@ out of me. In Tonks, he was seeing something he couldn't understand and had even been taught to hate, yet he was drawn to it at the same time. Very subtle, but very powerful too. Well done! I really, really liked this!

I think there is a bigger age gap between tonks and draco. shes already an auror by like the fifth book, where malfoy would only be around 16