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Reviews For: Molligan in the Lankey

Gray Cardinal
2007-11-13
ch 1,
abuseRunning quickly through all of these as the contest winds down...

Several of the stories in this batch are so far over the top that this one seems almost sedate by comparison. (The title is also...odd. Deconstructable, but odd.)

That said, "sedate" has its uses, and the narrative is well matched with its major characters. And as conservative as it is, the basic premise -- turning familiar characters inside out -- is indeed a soap opera staple.
Ace Ian Combat
2007-11-09
ch 1,
abuse“Do you, Joshua Lawrence Mankey, take this man to be your lawfully wedded husband?”

*Blinks, then bursts into a fit of giggles* Poor Camille, a shapeshifter mistaken for a man, who would've thought?

Interesting.
Danny-171984
2007-11-05
ch 1,
abuseOkay...that is very scary...scary to the bone. That is so evil. Either you are telling us something about your very being or you are a great writer...I won't say no more...Good job (whispering:don't kill me, plz)

Danny
Pharaoh Rutin Tutin
2007-11-01
ch 1,
abuseToo bad about Debutant.

Who knew those kids had it in them to be so darn devious? But it makes me think. The most devious student at MHS was Bonnie Rockwaller. Certainly SHE wouldn't attempt stunts like this against Junior and/or Senior?
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