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Reviews For: Tampered Skies

Gray Cardinal
2007-11-13
ch 1,
abuseRunning quickly through all of these as the contest winds down...

This stands out in the group as the one really straight psychological story; it isn't the only one with tragic/angst elements, but it plays its cards more seriously than almost any of the others. In some respects, that's actually truest to the soap opera theme of any of the entrants -- the real-world daytime dramas do often deal, or attempt to deal, with serious emotional crises in among all the scheming.

In some respects, though, this is also the story least like the original KP show; there are no references to Kim and Ron as world-savers, and indeed, no indication of Eric's origins. The triangle exists in something of a vacuum.
Danny-171984
2007-11-05
ch 1,
abuseFirst of all, Kim cheating on Ron makes me extremely mad. But knowing that Kim cheated with ERIC, that's makes me past 'beyong the line.' I hate Eric. Eric is the name of all evil in the KP world. How could she? I'm just glad that Ron is safe...I'm glad that Eric slap that B* (Sorry K, but you do deserve that name). Good job on making me feel like this, and at the same time I curse you! LOL!

Danny
TexasDad
2007-11-02
ch 1,
abuseOnce again a well written piece that left me feeling bummed out. Stayed up way too late to read it. Duck Dodgers is on in 3 minutes, maybe, just maybe I'll fall asleep in a better mood.
Solarstone
2007-11-02
ch 1,
abuseI kind of wish the bullet had hit Kim instead, and in her head. Acting so callous at being found out by Ron, then being frustrated and unbelieving that he would be hurt by the affair, it was all so sickening. Ron shouldn't be with her after this. She broke his heart with so little remorse, whats to say she wont do it again?
Pharaoh Rutin Tutin
2007-11-01
ch 1,
abuseMakes me want to sink my own teeth in that jerk and watch his insides spill out.
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