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| teshara 2008-07-29 ch 1,  | abuseOverall, I like this. The feel and the interaction between characters is great. I'm not sure what's going on with the random bold italicized words. They're kind of distracting. My only nitpick is that JFK was more likely to have been shot over issues with Cuba rather than with civil rights, which JFK wasn't really a supporter of. .uk/john_kennedy_and_civil_rights.htm |
| spencerthekat 2008-02-20 ch 3, | abuseThis was a cute story with Marie Curie - good thing that Jeff had the right piece of mind thru all his pain to see that she was not a medical doctor! I like the good natured humor and the deep friendship that comes thru in your writing of Bogg & Jeff! Keep up the GREAT work !! :) |
| spencerthekat 2008-02-20 ch 2, | abuseOMG...My Poor Jeffy!! :O I hope that Bogg can find someone else in time to save Jeffy! Sari, this was a great angsty chapter. Good job! |
| Morgan Elizebeth Jacobs 2008-02-14 ch 3, | abuseGreat fic! Very interesting too. |
| DaynaWayna 2007-12-06 ch 4, | abuseyay! All better! LOL :) I love your portrayl of Bogg and Jeff's relationship. This was a wonderful vingette Sari. :) |
| DaynaWayna 2007-12-06 ch 2, | abuseAh HA! I was right! :D Poor Jeff! :( But Bogg's not supposed to leave him! Sari! :dashes off to chapter 3: |
| DaynaWayna 2007-12-06 ch 1, | abuseWOW Sari! What a great 1st chapter! You nailed Jeff and Bogg perfectly! I love Jeff's teen attitude, and I feel his pain in correcting history so someone dies (shades of Crossroads, maybe? LOL) I hope Jeff's ok... could it be his appendix? Off to ch 2 to find out! :) |
| Mady Bay 2007-11-04 ch 1, | abuseGood start. I'm lookinh forward to seeing where you take this story. |
| The Geeky Quill 2007-11-02 ch 1, | abuseGood story so far. Wow, I was just thinking about The Voyagers. I used to watch it as a kid and just on a whim I decided to see if there was any fanfic. of it. Very cool. |
| spencerthekat 2007-11-02 ch 1, | abuseSari...what a great job you've done! :) I can't wait to read the rest of the story. I can only image what is to come :) |