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darkemogirl
2007-11-05
ch 3,
abuseand Roxas and Axel enter the story...
and you did make it a little longer... oh well.
guess it's alright.
It seems that Roxas is interested to know about Sora, which also makes me curious.

well, update soon.
will be waiting.

-darkemogirl-
sarcastique
2007-11-04
ch 3,
abuseI hate pompous authors. You sound like a pompous author. No need to state that you hate "yoai" stories. It offends those, like myself, who like both yaoi and non yaoi stories. I certainly dont declare how i hate non yaoi stories ( thats because i dont. But if i did I certainly wouldnt state that I hated them. it's just rude. ) And an even bigger pet peeve of mine is the whole "holding your story hostage." Write for yourself, don't dangle a half assed story over peoples heads and beg for reviews like it's actually worth reviewing. Because, frankly, it's not.

No Love.
Scarpaw
2007-11-04
ch 3,
abuse:) :) :) :) ;0 :) :) :) :) ;0 :) ;0
darkemogirl
2007-11-03
ch 2,
abusewhy not make it a little longer?
Sometimes, it's really confusing to read if you change point of views in the middle of the story. And also, It'll 'break' the story.

I really wonder what'll happen to Sora and what Riku will do...
I'm really, really interested.
You better update soon.

Will be waiting...
-darkemogirl-
Scarpaw
2007-11-03
ch 2,
abuseYEAH! You updated! I love you! You made me so happy!
BestFanOfAnime
2007-11-03
ch 1,
abuseCool story, update soon!
darkemogirl
2007-11-03
ch 1,
abuselooks interesting... better update soon.
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