Very nice, but very confusing all the same. Please update more! If you need help, then PM me in my profile.

This story is really interesting. I'd like to hear who Aelita's hiding from, and what happened to Jeremie, what'll happen with the others in prision, where's Carys, (assuming she'll be in this one at all) ect. TAKE THIS STORY OFF HAITUS AND UPDATE!

It's very interesting^^
I think the change in characters is good, it brings a little more mystery.
Keep writing and I hope I'll see more^^

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Um...okay. I was kinda expecting the ending of this chapter to be a little more complete, but I suppose it works. At least it's an update! ^-^ That makes me really happy!

Now...on to my still-unfinished story...

Update soon! ;D

~Burakku's Shadow/Manjoume-Enchantress

Hiya...it's me again! *bricked*

Ow... Odd, what'd you do that for?

Odd: "Because you're a lamo."

Me: "Neko bakka...!"

Odd: *frowns* "Did you just call me 'stupid cat' in Japanese?"

This is getting nowhere...*sweatdrops*

Violence has no true effect on me if it's just simply Police-type violence, but if it's murder, then it was a minor effect on me.

Carys having a sister, eh? Sounds...interesting.

I don't want you to rewrite the chapter...the change in character(s) is perfectly fine with me.

I like this... >B) It's so...evil. MUAHAHAHAHAHAHA! XD

Update soon!

~Burakku's Shadow/Manjoume-Enchantress

hey i really really really realy loved it! and was really good not what i thought it would be but its so awsome! no im more obssed with this show!

ur rite, that futur duz need chaingin-i lyke the Cori idea- but how iz it tat she rembers the lyoko trip? keep ritin-