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Reviews For: HAPPY HALLOWEEN BABE! - Reviews: Page 1 of 2

xXharuxiaOTPXx
2008-08-05
ch 2,
abusewtf? where's the chapter? please don't tell me that little drabble was a ** chapter.
xXharuxiaOTPXx
2008-08-05
ch 1,
abuseare you really that vain?
xXharuxiaOTPXx
2008-08-05
ch 3,
abuseare you proud of your grades?
Lord Melkor
2008-08-05
ch 3,
abuseno wonder your fanfictions suck, you have a terrible gpa.
Lord Melkor
2008-08-05
ch 2,
abuseauthor notes in the middle of text are really annoying. you should try to write longer chapters.
Lord Melkor
2008-08-05
ch 1,
abuselots of spelling erros and typos. you need to clean this up. and make it longer.
you are making the characters overly sexual. it's rather offensive. life isn't about sex and being sexy.
AlaskenWildflower
2008-02-23
ch 2,
abuseI love it!Cant wait till the next chapter!Gaaras the angle and Saura the devil XD
MidnightRider2214
2008-01-15
ch 2,
abuseI need the next chapter, Pls!
rottenkunoichi
2007-12-16
ch 2,
abuselol lmao i love the costumes
08 SiiLY.LiiTlE.GiiRL 94
2007-12-03
ch 1,
abuse** AWESOME! LOLZ
Sakura LOVE shadow
2007-11-03
ch 2,
abuseLOL LMAO Gaara will be a hott! Angel! UPdate soon!
alekat101
2007-11-02
ch 2,
abuseYea i LOVE it Can't Wait for the New one
alekat101
2007-11-02
ch 1,
abuseWOHOO I can't wait for the next Chappy
thegirlofmanymoods
2007-11-02
ch 1,
abusesounds good so far
ThiefRikku88
2007-11-01
ch 1,
abuseOMG! HALLOWEEN! :D

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