Incredible work! The sadness and depth brought tears to my eyes. Beautiful!

it was logan? thats so sad. dont it make ya wanna cry when something is left unsaid?

Oh my Goddess...That was wonderful. I only wonder, did Scott know?

*bursts into tears* ohmigod, ohmigod, ohmigod!

*sniffles* that was so beautifully heartbreaking... and poetic and so, so terribly sad... i love how you described the tensed, scared r/s between the two of them.. both too afraid to love freely... *wails* so good and so sad at ths same time!

hmm logan likes scott sad foc day stikes again great sotry

oooh, it was Scott, wasn't it? That's awesome. I love it. Keep writing!

wow...powerful stuff. never heard this type of slash before...do you have more? :-)

This is so sad, but it's beautifully written. I've never really been comfortable with the Scott-Logan pairing but you've managed to write them together without making it only about sex. This is a wonderful piece of work.

i'm confused

ooooohhhhh! that was so sad! Very good though, I loved it! It was very touching and dramatic and descripitive. great work. simply one of the best...

good, but a little thick. who was the teller of the story? you never mentioned.

You know, you have a nasty habit of killing people in your stories, hon *g*. As always, a great story :-)