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| xSTICKYxNOTEx 2008-04-27 ch 21, | abuseOh my God I'm sorry I didn't get a chance to review earlier! I'm kind of busy, my birthday is coming up and my friend insisted I have a party and when she insists there's no getting around it. But I made time before she came over (hahaha :D). |
| xSTICKYxNOTEx 2008-03-11 ch 20, | abuseFor such a huge move (I'll be honest I just looked up a world map to see if that actually was such a huge move, which it must've been), that was a great update! The Qaroks gave me goose bumps :P I hate, hate, hate, HATE giant killer bugs. They freak me out. My older sister sent me a list of the five most horrifying bugs in the world and I almost cried. Bot flies made me want to throw up. I'm shaking right now, just thinking about them scare me. Any bug bigger than about a half an inch is too big. Right, that's enough about horrible bugs. The second thing that made me stop and freak out (in a good way this time) was you using my name. I read that sentence and I got so excited! I stopped reading for a second to try to think of a way to thank you, and when I do think of one, I'll be sure to let you know. And now, the chapter as an overall: A-freaken-mazing. Usually, reading a story up to chapter twenty would kill me, I don't have the patience. But everything about your story is just simply amazing! All the characters, the plot, the detail, everything is so great. By the way, how do you like Australia? Now you're even farther from me. In fact, from where I am now, I'm reviewing your story yesterday (or tomorrow? I'm not actually sure...I just know your time is a day off from mine. @_@ I'm confused now). Whatever, my sense of time sucks anyway. I can barely read clocks (thank you inventor of the digital clock!) and I never know what day it is offhand. That was a lovely ramble I wrote you. I hope you enjoy it. Later~ |
| MissaSolemnis 2008-01-10 ch 18, | abuseOMG... You made me a vampire... XDXDXD And you killed me! XD XD XD I know, it's easy to hate Julia and thank you if you think my pen name is glorious. XD XD XD I like vampires... In interview with the vampire where Tom Cruise says to Brad Pitt "You're as handsome as ever." *shiver* XD Thanks. And I know you didn't use my name as a vampire just because you hate Julia. XD XD XD BTW, keep it up! |
| xSTICKYxNOTEx 2008-01-05 ch 18, | abuseoh this one was a lot longer! yay! aww i feel bad for georgia. i dunno why but i found the ending funny. i was thinking about sunako's expression when innay started speaking japanese and how innay was going to explain herself and i started laughing. also i thought it was really cute when innay went around the room talking to all the anatomical figures. i liked that part :D i was going to review earlier but for the past 2 days fanfiction was messing up and when i tried pulling it up it said there was an error. then i tried again today and it worked...weird. anyway great chapter! i loved loved loved loved it! update soon! later~ |
| xSTICKYxNOTEx 2007-12-24 ch 17, | abusethat threw me off when georgia was first mentioned i thought for sure samuel was knocking on sunako's door for innay. still an interesting chapter though :D a bit short but that's ok cuz you'll update soon right? of course. i wasn't expecting a vampire either. i can't wait to read about her memories :D:D i only have so much time before i have to leave so i cut this review here. update soon! later~ |
| xSTICKYxNOTEx 2007-12-17 ch 16, | abuseAHH! SAMAEL! *jumps up and down* this is exciting! can't wait to see what happens next! hurry and update soon please please please! |
| xSTICKYxNOTEx 2007-12-06 ch 14, | abuseyou changed the summary. nice. what's the next manga gunna be? :D:D this was a nice chapter. a switch from the last chapter. this one is calmer and sweeter. i think i figured out what the best part of your writing is. you really capture the feel of the scene. the last chapter you can feel how nervous ranmaru was and all the tension when they couldn't find innay. in this chapter its calm and you can feel the bond between sunako and innay and it makes me feel good too. that's quite a talent you have. keep it up! update soon! later~ |
| xSTICKYxNOTEx 2007-12-05 ch 13, | abusei'm not a morning person either. i'm also not a snow person which i'm getting a lot of here :P snow is too cold. then again the sun is too hot. really i hate all seasons and all weather. but that's just cuz i'm weird :P anywayz awesome chapter :D sunako is probably gunna be mad that they left without her. where did innay go? do you know or is that part of the undeveloped plot? :D:D i'm literally bouncing aroung in my wheelie chair! this is exciting. can't wait for the next chapter! update soon! later~ |
| xSTICKYxNOTEx 2007-12-04 ch 12, | abuseshe's leaving already? i'm assuming she runs into samuel or something... don't tell me though. awesome chapter!! its very detailed!! i'm curious how did the crow drawing and all the titles get into her sketch book? again don't tell me i'll find out when you post again. anyway you did a really good job with this chapter! every chapter just seems to get better and better :D can't wait to see what happens next! i'm excited :D:D i looked at your poll in your profile. that's a hard one. i didn't vote yet but i plan to. anyway its hard. if she had a partner it would make all her trips less lonely but if she got one how would she have gotten them? they're another manga traveller perhaps? if she had a partner she'd also be watching out for them all the time and i don't know if innay is up for that. well i'll get on to that later. by the way no i don't live on a full diet of sweets i also like starchy foods (pasta and potatoes :D but not with my candy). so sweets is like...a half diet. you're actually not the first person to say that. my neighbor (who happens to be my best guy-friend) was over a few days ago and he was reading an email i was sending and i was writing a lot of mushy comforting stuff because her mom was really mad at her and i clicked send and he said 'jeez be careful with what you say you might give someone diabetes' and i responded by giving him a hug :D cuz i'm like that. *hugs* later~ |
| xSTICKYxNOTEx 2007-12-03 ch 11, | abusenice chapter! sorry it took so long for me to review it. i caught a cold :P now i can't breath through my nose at all and i sound funny. but anyway your new chapter. AWESOMENESS! that was a really good discription in the first paragraph. i've never seen a picture but i was able to visualize it really good. nice job! awesome job! and yeah that'd be a cool avatar. my profile page is all business (haha i was a business man for halloween :D ask if you want i have a whole story to go with it but i won't put it here) so i don't have an avatar. but the eye would be a really cool avatar! which by the way is very well drawn. its cool. thanks for sending it to me! another way to show everyone is to put it on a website or something and put the link in your profile or something. just a suggestion :D i gotta go. later~ |
| xSTICKYxNOTEx 2007-11-29 ch 10, | abusei meant to review earlier but i read it and the review-thing wasn't working. which kinda sucks cuz i forgot everything i was gunna say. :D:D can't wait until the next chapter! you're finally revealing the stranger! like i should be doing (heh -_-U)... that reminds me of your little reply-thing at the top! :D you're so sweet. if i could hug you through the computer or something i would. for now you're just going to need your imagination for me to hug you... or perhaps a bear or something would suffice. i dunno. but anyway *BIG HUGS!* i'll update as soon as i think of what they're doing. and you can keep in mind that the next chapter (whenever it comes up) is specially for you :D cuz you're just so super-awesomely sweet that way. later~ PS: update soon :D |
| xSTICKYxNOTEx 2007-11-26 ch 9, | abusehopefully i'll post before the ride starts. its a little dangerous to be writing on a roller coaster. oh mysterious :D who's this guy? ah this'll be awesome i can tell. to bad this chapter was so short. that doesn't give you permission to update faster though. you have to wait for me to catch up. i need to post one thing before you go post 20 more chapters. but i still can't wait to see what happens! |
| Roses and Lillys 2007-11-25 ch 7, | abuselMAO she landed on all fours!XD i cant stop laughing! |
| Roses and Lillys 2007-11-25 ch 6, | abusewow |
| xSTICKYxNOTEx 2007-11-21 ch 8, | abusenice! awesome chapter but you have to slow down so i can catch up! hey by the way what manga is innay going to go to next? just out of curiosity. again i'd write more but i can't i have to catch up with all that updating. wouldn't it be nice if i was as fast as you... |