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Wandering-Recluse
2009-05-03 . chapter 10
Update soon please! It's been far too long! I want to know what happens when Christine wakes up! This is very interesting, especially since Erik doesn't wear a mask. Poor Christine, seeing Thomas and her friends die like that. That should shake up her mental state for a while. Please, update soon!

-W.R-
October Thorne
2008-11-21 . chapter 10
mur:))
i likey

Hugs and Kisses,
The Review Fairy (aka October)
anonymous
2008-11-09 . chapter 10
Please write more! I am curious to know what happens next! Review!
Angelspot
2008-10-24 . chapter 10
I really like your story. Just as an Idea You should have a scene years from now or then were Christine and Erik are together with children. Raoul goes over there for research and tress pass on their land so he/and crew are taken to be judged. Raoul neels on the ground awaiting his fate when Erik and Christine on his arm come out. Christine wearing something very simpler to Pure's black dress from Carmed in Bride and Gloom. (The Nearest picture I could find is at http://nd.blog.cz/c/charmed-serial.blog.cz/obrazky/23325293.jpg)And they let him free but Christine and Raoul say their goodbyes to each other.
strodgfrgf
2008-10-23 . chapter 10
ooh erik's past! creepy! update soon please! im eager to see christine's reaction when she wakes up.
musicxlax
2008-10-21 . chapter 9
this is a great story! i really hope you plan on continuing it. it has wonderful pontential and i think you could keep it going for as long as you want! please update son! : D
~Animal Lover
smoking caramels
2008-10-19 . chapter 10
YAY! An update! This is the most original AU of Phantom and I love it to bits! Keep up the great work!
zagato
2008-10-19 . chapter 10
Thank you for updating. I like this story. Please continue.
Chantal
2008-10-18 . chapter 10
Nice to see you update. That's an interesting exchange between Wipu and Erik at the end; Erik admits and accepts guilt, but at the same time confesses his past transgressions. And Wipu must come to terms with the fact that the man he serves and has devoted most of his adult life to is capable of such things. Keep up the good work!
Rikku Ree
2008-10-18 . chapter 10
I like how you make the readers forget the fact that the whole tribe are cannibals; what with Wipu talking about blood on Erik's hands and all. I know he says it only because they knew the person, but it just seems ironic and all XD

Anyway, though you said you'd probably update December-ish, I still hope you update sooner than that :D
jtbwriter
2008-10-18 . chapter 10
I just found this story-what a great read! Senatu (Erik)
has made a big mistake-killing Christine's team is stupid-
he'll never win her being that dumb! LOL! But I really
want to see what he does next-thanks for a goodie!
Now what?:)!
terbear
2008-10-18 . chapter 10
Interesting - do we really have to wait until December? Sigh. I know how life can get hectic and it's certainly more important than fiction, but just know that I'm interested in seeing what you come up with next for this story!
Arcelia
2008-10-17 . chapter 10
Yay! New chapter!
It was good, even though nothing much happened...a transition chapter, yes?

Update soon!!
Timeflies
2008-10-17 . chapter 10
Interesting conversation with the woman, his wife, to the medicine Dr. How profound to hear Senatu say, he had blood on his hands and Wipu doesn't understand all the reasoning of this affirmation, which had been told to him. More please.
wishful teardrop
2008-10-17 . chapter 10
sweet! an update! i liked the chapter. update again soon!
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