Hey Rissa,

I would leave you a longer review, but please, please, PLEASE update at unknowableroom (dot) org! People are positively DYING for an update there!

Please update soon there,

-- UR (dot) org

Finishh this :\

I don't think I've ever read a Lily/James story that has moved me in such a way. I've been crying non-stop for the past twenty minutes. You've managed to convey so many emotions so perfectly, it's incredible. You're an amazing author, and your grasp of the emotive language is phenomenal. You should be really proud of yourself.

Keep up the amazing work, and update soon!

I am absolutely amazid by this ff. I don't really know what to say. This is one of the first Lily & James ffs, which is not about 'happy-family-all-is-well'. Sure, Lily and James symbolise the perfect couple, but you also show the impact something like thiscan have on other people, the jalousy etc. I really admire you for writing it and I want to tell you that I really really enjoyed reading you story.

Amy

DUDE There's 1 more chapter left!
1!
Finish it already

look I never said..er... write this about a fic before but this is too un ficish like a battle of clashing emotions a tornado of steam,anger,jelousy eveything and in the midst of it all the purest most strongest emotion love true love waiting to survive surviving living through and triumphing. see how that sounds philosaphical? well your fic is way too much philosaphical. lighten up. no offence intaended for anything said..er... written at all. so sorry

I absolutely love this story and as much as i dont like what sirius did to james and lily I really wish he and marlene would live happily ever after even though it just wouldnt be right please please update soon!

though i havent finished the story yet I think this is a good place to reivew though i would normally save it for the end but I felt like doing it now...ok so anyway I just want to say that normally I despise stories that change point of view in chapters now this story does that but I think its perfect because it does that but it covers all the angles without listing the same events in some point of view. This story though is very intense and angsty and I am just praying for some kind of happy ending cant wait to finish this so great job so far!

this is an excellent story!
i cant wait to read more!

hello.
i've read your story at least three times and i absolutely love it.

i'm reviewing, however, because of the "worth reading" section in your profile - i have a story to recommend. it is the ULTIMATE SUPERIOR Lily/James fic: Commentarius by B.C. Daily. check it out! :)

Oh me, oh my
Thats strange, you see
Thats not what i expected
To happen to lily


P.S. If you didn't notice, that was a poem and I also think you're an amazing author.

For the past two chapters of this fic, i have had to read with my dear companions tissue and trash can. You, my friend are much too goo at relating to other people's feelings for your own good.

very interesting very interesting indeed
nice chapter

wow that was a really nice chapter i really liked how sirius and james had that heart to heart at the end that was really nice

oh wow that was really deep and dark and interesting i have never seen someone write sirius with such substance great chapter :)