 falling.petals 2008-03-25 . chapter 1UWAHH [this is a cry of happiness, btw]! A HimenoxSasame pairing! I love Hayate, but I love Sasame too; it drives me crazy! You had a couple of misspells here and there, but great overall. And a request too: i don't know if you planned on doing this anyways, but could you make a love triangle in your story with Himeno, Hayate , and Sasame? I can't write them myself (I'd never know how to end it!). It'd be great if you did, even if you make Hayate loses in the end (poor guy). Keep writing! |