 Laurenthalas 2008-07-12 . chapter 7It definitely was worth the wait. I can't understand how you're coming up with all this, it's god...
I'm writing a Freddy-fanfic myself and it just feels so dumb comparing to this. |
 Viv Slvrdreamer 2008-07-11 . chapter 7wonderful story so far and well worth the wait for me at least
i cant wait to see what will hapen next |
 Ghostwriter 2008-07-11 . chapter 7Awesome job. Catch ya on the flip side. |
 violetrose18 2008-07-10 . chapter 7Update faster! this story is starting to get really good! |
 Classic Rock Junkie 2008-06-19 . chapter 6This is a great story. Its one of the only ones I'm actually checking up on every once in a while. ^^ This one is so added to my Story Alerts. I'm thinking, the good thing about this one is its prolly gonna go on for more than a few more chapters. There's certain stories you can just tell that. Please keep up the super awesome work.
And I thought that was just a rumor that Mr. Totally Stupendous Englund was not playing Freddy! They can't do that to me! I've taken pride in the fact that my favorite horror movie series actually has rhe same actor playing the villain in all the films.
Plus, from what I've heard from Robert Englund himself, he LOVES playing Freddy. |
 Laurenthalas 2008-05-02 . chapter 6You have no reason to lose your will to write. This chapter (and the whole story) was one of the best I've ever read. And I can't wait for the next chapters!
(WHAT! Robert Englund's not in the next film?! That's just so wrong..!) |
 Xyris 2008-05-01 . chapter 6You're not alone, Jokerina. I'm rather poisoned myself that Robert won't be returning for the remake - to say nothing about the fact that their remaking a classic! ><
Anywho, what can I say about your little yarn right here? Well, I have to applaud you for your thorough knowledge of the Nightmare universe, as well attempting to incorporate all of the key players of the series into the story. You have a lot of different plot lines at work here though, so it's difficult to pin down if you're trying to tell a time travel story, a reality crossover (a la 'New Nightmare'), or even the tale of a woman in a coma who's trapped in the dream world. Try and single out one distinctive plot line and go with it, so that you don't confuse or disorient your readers.
All in all though, it's shaping up to be a very interesting story, with the intriguing dynamic of a protagonist that's seemingly impervious to dream kills. I look forward to seeing where this goes. |
 Darkness Takes Over 2008-05-01 . chapter 6Good chapter, I enjoyed the little conversation between Hannah and Amanda. Also the scene between mother and father was well written too. |
 violetrose18 2008-04-30 . chapter 6Cool keep it up your good at writing! |
 DreamRevolution 2008-04-30 . chapter 5 I'm sorry the link is suppose to be (Again removing the *.):
*ht*tp*:*/*/*w*ww*.*ipe*ti*ti*on*s*.*c*om*/pet*iti*on/non*ewn*ig*htm*are*/*ind*ex*.ht*ml* |
 DreamRevolution 2008-04-30 . chapter 6 Well Jokerina there is a way to stop the nightmare remake. just copy,paste,remove the * signs (Because I'm Sure hates direct linking in the reveiw section.) then go to this link:http:*//**/peti*tion/*nonewni*ghtmare*/index.*html
Anyways,great new chapter. I love the way you showed Freddy's Thoughts about his mom and the interactions and Frendship he has with Hannah. My Only dislike about this chapter is that You skipped the 4th film intirely. I Would have liked to have seen what Hannah whould have done during Freddy and Alice's final battle from the 4th film. And you forgot that Alice's unborn son Jacob was a major important player,key,and factor in the Film this chapter was covering. I would have liked to have seen what the interactions between Hannah and Jacob whould have been like.But otherwise, Great chapter.
(Maybe you could shove those parts/chapters inbetween Chapters 5 and 6 thus making this one chapter 8 or 9,depending on how long the parts I suggested whould be...just a thought.)
Thank you for listening to my last review and keep up the good work. |
 Deathra-horrorlover 2008-04-29 . chapter 6I'm ** about that too. How can it even be possible to have Freddy not played by Robert?
Anyways i love your story and hope to see more soon. |
 DreamRevolution 2008-04-29 . chapter 5 QUIT STALLING, AND POST THE NEXT CHAPTER ALREADY! DON'T LEAVE US ALL IN THE DARK!?! |
 Deathra-horrorlover 2008-04-12 . chapter 3I want a cookie too! Sorry. Well anyways I love it. Not much else to say except that its written exceptionaly well. A few spelling mistakes but nothing big. |
 Darkness Takes Over 2008-03-30 . chapter 5Hi, sorry for not replying to your message you sent to me earlier. My computer was broke and I had some personal problems...etc.
Well, this chapter was good. You wrote Freddy well - esepeically in the way of why he murdered the children...etc. Good job. |