The characterizations are great! XD You're too modest. I like the premise, too, and it's refreshing to see Jigen and Zenigata go on a misadventure. Five stars!

Very cool story. I really enjoyed it! Jigen is my fav. character and I'm sad to say they're aren't very many (let alone good) stories about him. Yours is the exception of course. I wouldn't mind seein' more from ya on this topic!!

Heh. You have some very clever dialogue here, and even though you say you haven't seen any Lupin the 3rd for some time, I think your characterisations are spot on. A few technical glitches (spelling, grammar), but they don't detract too much from the story. Amusing stuff; well done.

This was very well written. :3

The Jigen/Zenigata friendship thing scared me. (Lots of things scare me, though. xD) Very interesting subject and story behind the idea. That had to be weird to see.

I rarely write stuff in character, so I'm not the best to critique on that subject.