WOW YOU HAVE A GOOD START TO THE STORY!
LOVED IT! IT WAS GREAT!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!
I WILL KEEP ON READING IF YOU CONTINUE!

Hey! this is so cool! I thought it was a one-shot at first!! Loved it!
Charli

I can not wait for the rest of this story!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Interesting. Is this a one-shot or a chapter story?

Please update soon! i wanna know what happens next.

oh sounds really interesting.I actually thought this was a oneshot but then i noticed it wasn't before i read it,i'm not too fond to long stories unless its good...and this seems like its going to be great.update soon!

sounds good!
rhi xx

Sounds amazing so far! :)
I can't wait to see what's going to happen.
Update soon?

-Ashley

Sounds interesting :)

WOWIE! Sounds cool!