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The M.B.A Squad
2008-01-27 . chapter 8
WHEN ARE YOU GONNA START RACHEL?!?!?!?!
punkgrl326
2007-11-13 . chapter 8
LOL! She can't help calling you creator XD I think Madoka is the second best Azu-OC ever created (next to Koyomiko of course). Can't wait to hear Rachel's song!

See ya around!
Weener1
2007-11-11 . chapter 8
hehe...seriously calm. I would call this cute like I do all the others but I'm sure Madoka would-

(doorbells rings)

Jay: (opening door to see Madoka holding an unconscious Yukari)

Madoka: Ah, Jay-san. I have brought Yukari-san for she has transgressed the Shovel Treaty of 2007.

Jay: Oh, really now? Just leave her here. I'm sure she'll love etching those little numbers on the top of pills. By hand!

Madoka: (bows) Very nice to see you again, Jay-san. I shall take my leave.

Jay: Oh, Yukari-chan do you want the small pills or the big pills?

Yukari: (unconscious and drooling)

Jay: Oh, no preference? I'll assume you like the realy small ones!

Can't wait for the next update!
oppdis
2007-11-05 . chapter 7
OH MY GAWD! That was hilarious, 10x more after reading Chapter 2!

I'll now be looking into AzuDai Returns more!

-oppdis
jamesbondkid2001
2007-11-05 . chapter 7
This was absolutely perfect! XD

Joe: No it wasn't!! My reputation is so ruined!! My secret is now gonna be posted all over the internet!

JBK: I know! XD

Joe: DAMN YOU, TAKINO! DAMN YOU, AR!

Please excuse me while I go laugh again XD
Weener1
2007-11-05 . chapter 7
In this case it's only a small world below the equator!

Joe: Don't make me get you too!

Jay: ...I don't even know who you are.

Joe: Oh...well, damn... (walks off)

Nice tribute to the most 'impaired' of the new Azu-characters.
Weener1
2007-11-04 . chapter 6
Alas, my exceptions only involved the girls hitting YOU with shovels. They can strike Kimura all they want!

That song really is Kimura in a nutshell, good work!

Jay: Do not fret, dear Kaorin! You still have me to protect you from that letcher!

Kaorin: Fantastic...
The Unfathomable Sisters
2007-11-04 . chapter 5
((Sister 7))
Yay, you put all of them together!! And your still getting wacked with shovels. xD
jamesbondkid2001
2007-11-04 . chapter 4
Aw...cute

Hope to see more!

JBK2K1
Weener1
2007-11-03 . chapter 5
In a way...very cute. And it was quite an excellent tribute to these two friends.

Jay: Yukari...I told you once. You are not getting a second chance!

Yukari: Umm...uhh...How about some saki? (waves around a bottle)

Jay: Nay! (slams shackles on Yukari's wrists) I hope you like husking corn!

Yukari: Aww... And there's no way..?

Jay: Not a chance. You must work off your sins.

Yukari: Can I drive there?

Jay: You're the biggest flight risk known to man.

Yukari: (weeps)
Funakounasoul
2007-11-03 . chapter 4
Aw! I liked it! In a way, this is your very own (late) birthday present to her!

Thank you. :D
oppdis
2007-11-03 . chapter 4
WAUGH! I've submitted 3 reviews to the same fic in ONE DAY! Alright, this review is for any further updates today since I'm very busy typing like crazy.

Good job with writing out Koyomiko (and any additional characters).

*Stands near computer, waiting for third story alert, about to snap*

(Don't worry, I'll be fine.)

-oppdis
Weener1
2007-11-03 . chapter 4
Aww~ Super cute! I am certainly curious about the next one!
Weener1
2007-11-03 . chapter 3
Ah, the rather mundane schoolgirl gets a well...rather mundane song! Excellent!
oppdis
2007-11-03 . chapter 3
WHOA, SO BLUNTLY!

Chihiro's actually made me cackle... on the inside. How very brave of you to hit YOURSELF with The Shovel. I probably would've (not) done the same thing.

-oppdis
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