Wow... It's very well written. The choice of words...sentence construstion and the fluidity is just perfect. Honestly, that's all I could say. I can't wait for the next chapter!

wow, that was a roller coaster of emotion. Your descriptions are amazing! Please continue this fic. ^^

oh...I think I might just like this. The description and the way you write is quite lovely. I look forward to reading more!

Your scenes were so vivid in this first chapter, and you conveyed an aura of suspense quite well! Good work. I enjoyed reading it and look forward to what you have in store.

Stunning. It looks very promising!

Your adjective use was a little heavy, especially near the beginning. It would've been a bit better if you hadn't used quite so many descriptions. Other than that, I fell in love with the way you played out the action.

One point I noticed was your take on the pain of the kunai in his leg- that was very well done. It was a subtle hint into how hard it was to be a shinobi. Very, very well done.

I shall be watching this one very closely.

I must say, it looks like a masterpiece, hermit :)

Keep it up!

Interesting. I look forward to seeing what comes next.

Excellent, more please!

Yay! I was waiting for you to post another kakasaku :D I love your witting.

Wow. This is an awesome start. Beautifully written and dealing with what happened to Rin, something you don't really see much in KakaSaku fics. Great job. I'm looking forward to your upcoming chapters. =)

Oh my gosh (you crazy girl) how could you even think for a second that we would not like this?!

I like it so well I'm having trouble forming coherent thoughts, much less write a coherent review. (When I was reading it, I was like, "Okay, so it's probably Kakashi...and Sakura...but wait, no, it's not Sakura, not at all, but woah, it's not Kakashi either!" Unless code names and transformation jutsus are being used...*mind boggles*) So here goes.

You have such a way with words--everything flows perfectly, even their thoughts--and (it's so well-written) your style, the mood you convey with your wonderful word choice (so tense, so real, it's like we're right there with them)...it's all perfect. I loved that first paragraph--the descriptions were absolutely fantastic--and I loved everything else, too. (Sorry that this is such a crazy review.)

To sum it all up, I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE. ^_^