Reviews for The Lying Game

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Commander 2008-08-03 ch 16,	abuseI know I'm late on updating this, but I didn't have quick internet access this summer. ANYHOO. Brilliant ending, simply brilliant. Just when we thought that was all of Bulba... well, you know how to pull readers in to the next story, I've gotta say. And OMG THEY KISSED. XD Forgive my fangirlishness, but I totally wasn't expecting that, especially with Belle initiating it... and it was hot, yes. Steelbeak/Belle is my new DW OTP. ;) Again, great story! Well worth your time. :)
LADYMALLARD 2008-07-18 ch 1,	abuseI have just reread this story, in addition to the other story, which preceeds this one. They are both great. Sheer genious. What a delema, I thought the Stearminator, was frightning, but having Fenton's secret out, because of F.O.U.L and Tarus Bulba capture him, without the suit, that was so scary, Bulba being ruthless, trying to force Fenton, to tell him, the where abouts, of the Gizmosuit. For Fenton, to enginear an escape, reminisent of his tricking of M.E.L.L., that super computor from space,using his talent, for counting,was amazing. The good guys and the villens getting togeather, to defeet Bulba yet agin, great move, I wonder though, if it is, for the last time, concidering this mysterious "Plan B." I thought, that the Lady F.O.U.L. leader was great, in getting the Eggmen, to let the Heros go. The possibility of Fenton, out on his own and a possible move to St.Canard, opens up, alot of fun possibilitys, in the rivalry, between D.W. and Giz. I enjoyed this story, from start to finnish, sheer genious. Keep writing, can't wait for your next story.
Uftaki 2008-06-15 ch 16,	abuseThe whole bit with Belle and Steelbeak was a delightful bit of flirting and banter. ^_^ But _WOW!_ What a way to -end- it! x.x; Talk about -unexpected-! Just when you think everything is -over-... ha! Definately a surprise, and a cliff-hanger of an ending! This was a fantastic story; you did a great job on it! :D
The Illustrious Crackpot 2008-06-13 ch 16,	abuseI have to say, my favorite part of this entire story is probably the titular idea that "trust" and "lying" is all a game, and the subsequent descriptions thereof. Especially when Norton turned the situation around, saying that, instead of the game based upon lying, they were playing a game where the key is to trust each other. Overall, though, incredible work, and even though I haven't done a very good job of keeping up with chapter updates this time around, I'm looking forwards to more from you!
Guardian of Courage 2008-06-10 ch 16,	abuseThis fic is awesome. You developed everyone masterfully--even the villains. I'm glad you're going to be writing another darkwing fic soon. Even if it takes awhile. This one and it's prequel were great.
acosta perez jose ramiro 2008-06-07 ch 16,	abuseSplatter Phoenix is coming! Great ending. As usual, your Belle and Steelbeak's scenes are wonderfully done. Keep the good writing.
Kooshmeister 2008-06-06 ch 16, anon.	abuseLOL "Neck juice." I forsee Taurus being kept in a dish in a lab...
DarkwingFan 2008-06-06 ch 16,	abuseA very good story Shekinah! Can't wait to read Mind over splatter!
Wolvmbm 2008-06-06 ch 16,	abuseAn evil like Tarus Bulba never dies. :) Still this was a great ending and a weird way of showing that lies can often be use to hide the true feelings of others as well as honor of dealing with enemies. This has been a great adventure and I love every moment of it. Thank you so much for such a lovely story and I hope for more stories featuring Darkwing duck in the future. ;)
Irual 2008-06-06 ch 16,	abuseWow really nice plot and you are really good at pacing your chapters too. I really enjoyed how you gave the villians a life and personality and rounded them out. Villains are hard for me to put on paper properly. Please don't make us wait to long for your next fic. Since I have just started writting I know how much reviews encourage writers and I have added you to my favorites list do I can review your stuff. Very nice job overall congrats your friend Irual
Uftaki 2008-05-26 ch 15,	abusehmm... interesting developments, here. Nice touch with Belle, and the Eggmen letting Darkwing and co. go. :) F.O.W.L. knowing Fenton's identity _is_ a real problem, not really just for Fenton, but anyone -associated- with him. Him moving would probably help some issues, but... there's still a lot of other troubles that could come up. It would be near impossible, really, to safeguard against all possibilites. They'd just have to hope F.O.W.L. doesn't go after friends, or family, all the time. ^_^;
blueraven1999 2008-05-26 ch 15, anon.	abuseWow! Quick update. I really liked the end of this chapter where Fenton was rambling on. I can't wait to see Darkwing's reaction when Fenton tells him he's moving to St. Canard. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
Uftaki 2008-05-26 ch 14,	abuseOh... what a climactic battle! Some of the insults were just -amsuing-... while the ones that finished it off? Ho... Definately a sore point, for Taurus Bulba. "How far the mighty have fallen", indeed. I have to admit, I was afraid, for a moment, for Steelbeak... until Belle ran up to check on him.
acosta perez jose ramiro 2008-05-26 ch 15,	abuseAgain, excellent job with all the characters. Great scenes at the destroyed F.O.W.L headquarter. Keep the good writing.
pokefan366 2008-05-24 ch 14,	abuseDeath by insult. For a criminal as bad as Taurus Bulba, there's no better way to go. Keep up the good work.

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