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Sakr9 10/24/11 . chapter 7
What lie?

The lie that Misa is Kira 2 and L is L?

..or that they don't love each other?

Omg this ending is drastically evil. L became evil! I love it though... He's almost punishing her for... Being her...

Or he's trying to kill her...

Anyhow, this was good, not the ending I expected at all, I thought you'd go original on us and kill of the lovely L, so it was a nice twist.

Thanks for writing this fic I enjoyed a bit of LxMisa and your writing... Thanks!
sakR9 10/23/11 . chapter 6
Woot woot! That was pretty good and poetic too!
sakR9 10/23/11 . chapter 5
Oh naughty greedy L!
sakR9 10/23/11 . chapter 4
I didn't understand how this chapter was about sloth, but cute nonetheless :)

I thought L would have just grabbed her shoulder and kissed her as she sat down because grabbing a shoulder and propelling someone up is kinda hard. Especially if you're kissing too.

Or maybe she was standing up in the first place and I read wrong *hides face in shame
sakR9 10/23/11 . chapter 3
Lol, she's Misa-Misa flavour!
sakR9 10/23/11 . chapter 2
Haha! Ah I liked this!

Maybe you could have written ,she was an enjoyable read, or a good looking book, or... Something...

Ok I forgot, but your line was good too, thanks for writing this!
sakR9 10/18/11 . chapter 1
A little too many 'Why?'s but great nontheless :)

Can't wait to read... Well you know which sin I want to read, Lust!
Q u e e n V a m p 4/8/11 . chapter 7
For L, I would sin and sin again
Markus Ramikin 1/17/11 . chapter 7
I'm not a great fan of dysfunction and sadism, and while I know L is a little evil, that last chapter overtaxed my ability to believe we're still talking about L.

Still, I have to admit the whole story was very well written, and I guess a chapter entitled Wrath, in a story about sins, couldn't have ended much better. So good work!
second soul of a cat 1/15/11 . chapter 7
"They were sinners, the worst kind of them all.

But in a strange and dysfunctional way, despite the sadism and pain, they were happy.

Happy in their lie."

3 L/Misa in great words
Person Of Death 12/26/09 . chapter 7
True, true. Death Note doesn't have any happy endings. Anyways, I really liked the last chapter. It has a nice twist in it.
Queenofthemausoleum 10/9/09 . chapter 7
my favorite chapter was 5-greed. there needs to be more awesome misa and ryuuzaki fanfiction!:)
Missy 9/20/09 . chapter 7
This is a great fic!I like the thought of a not entirely sane,functional L.This is my fav pairing in the Death Note series!It was so d*mn intense towards every new chapter.(excuse the lanuage above.)Wigh that it could have been longer,though.Great fic :,)
TopazDragon 8/13/09 . chapter 7
Oh wow, this was simply too good. The way you used the sins to describe their relationship. Keep up the good writing.
Bolmung LK 2/20/09 . chapter 7
Wow! Nice plotline!
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