 Sakr9 10/24/11 . chapter 7 What lie?
The lie that Misa is Kira 2 and L is L?
..or that they don't love each other?
Omg this ending is drastically evil. L became evil! I love it though... He's almost punishing her for... Being her...
Or he's trying to kill her...
Anyhow, this was good, not the ending I expected at all, I thought you'd go original on us and kill of the lovely L, so it was a nice twist.
Thanks for writing this fic I enjoyed a bit of LxMisa and your writing... Thanks! |
 sakR9 10/23/11 . chapter 6Woot woot! That was pretty good and poetic too! |
 sakR9 10/23/11 . chapter 5Oh naughty greedy L! |
 sakR9 10/23/11 . chapter 4I didn't understand how this chapter was about sloth, but cute nonetheless :)
I thought L would have just grabbed her shoulder and kissed her as she sat down because grabbing a shoulder and propelling someone up is kinda hard. Especially if you're kissing too.
Or maybe she was standing up in the first place and I read wrong *hides face in shame |
 sakR9 10/23/11 . chapter 3Lol, she's Misa-Misa flavour! |
 sakR9 10/23/11 . chapter 2Haha! Ah I liked this!
Maybe you could have written ,she was an enjoyable read, or a good looking book, or... Something...
Ok I forgot, but your line was good too, thanks for writing this! |
 sakR9 10/18/11 . chapter 1A little too many 'Why?'s but great nontheless :)
Can't wait to read... Well you know which sin I want to read, Lust! |
 Q u e e n V a m p 4/8/11 . chapter 7For L, I would sin and sin again |
 Markus Ramikin 1/17/11 . chapter 7I'm not a great fan of dysfunction and sadism, and while I know L is a little evil, that last chapter overtaxed my ability to believe we're still talking about L.
Still, I have to admit the whole story was very well written, and I guess a chapter entitled Wrath, in a story about sins, couldn't have ended much better. So good work! |
 second soul of a cat 1/15/11 . chapter 7"They were sinners, the worst kind of them all.
But in a strange and dysfunctional way, despite the sadism and pain, they were happy.
Happy in their lie."
3 L/Misa in great words |
 Person Of Death 12/26/09 . chapter 7True, true. Death Note doesn't have any happy endings. Anyways, I really liked the last chapter. It has a nice twist in it. |
 Queenofthemausoleum 10/9/09 . chapter 7my favorite chapter was 5-greed. there needs to be more awesome misa and ryuuzaki fanfiction!:) |
 Missy 9/20/09 . chapter 7 This is a great fic!I like the thought of a not entirely sane,functional L.This is my fav pairing in the Death Note series!It was so d*mn intense towards every new chapter.(excuse the lanuage above.)Wigh that it could have been longer,though.Great fic :,) |
 TopazDragon 8/13/09 . chapter 7Oh wow, this was simply too good. The way you used the sins to describe their relationship. Keep up the good writing. |
 Bolmung LK 2/20/09 . chapter 7Wow! Nice plotline! |