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| csimouse 2008-04-25 ch 4,  | abuseI just read this story. I enjoyed reading it. It was well written. It said the end, but it does not show that it is completed. So it is the end, or what? |
| LOCISVU 2007-12-14 ch 4, | abuseOkay.It's over already? |
| cryingblacktears 2007-12-14 ch 4, | abuseyay!! Happy ending!! *dances around computer* I did not expect Sara being pregnant...the ending was brilliant!! |
| HellsAngel44 2007-12-14 ch 4, | abuseVery well done. Really enjoyed your story. Loved the ending. It was a bit of a surprise Sara was pregnant. Thanks for the story. HellsAngel44 = ) |
| CSISnape 2007-12-13 ch 4, | abuseCute in a gross way. Loved it. :) |
| ishotsherlock 2007-12-13 ch 4, | abusegreat chapter ake :D |
| Number1GSRCSIfan 2007-12-13 ch 4, | abusehi! i loved it! it was really gd and catherine was reall funny. please say ur continuing! make a sequel please. i promise ill review every chapter =)! |
| Eefje 2007-11-29 ch 3, anon. | abuseHayhay! write further,please! You made me curious! Eef |
| LOCISVU 2007-11-23 ch 3, | abuseHe's finally home!And none too soon! |
| KoalaHC 2007-11-22 ch 1, | abuseGood story, and I like how you're developing it. Just a few minor things - 1) In the first chapter Catherine refers to the dog as Bruno and then later in the story the dog's name is Bruno, as we learned in one episode. 2) There are some run-on sentences (but I read around those). Overall I enjoyed this story and the direction you are taking. I hope you update soon. |
| HellsAngel44 2007-11-21 ch 3, | abuseThat was a very big suprise. Looking foward to how Grissom will react to the situation he walked into. Another chapter well done. Keep up the great work. HellsAngel44 = ) |
| charming-kayleigh 2007-11-20 ch 3, | abusethat must have been a surprise. Fantastic. Thanks for writing. *~*kay |
| Becca 2007-11-20 ch 3, anon. | abuseLOVE IT!! Update son Please! Can't wait for the next chapter :D |
| GSRFAN27 2007-11-20 ch 3, | abuselove it so far! can't wait for the next chapter! update soon please. |
| My Kate 2007-11-20 ch 3, | abusenever saw THAT coming...I figured he would just call...I hope Sara won't be too ill...having Gil there would certainly make her feel better...but that fever worries me...please don't let her be TOO sick...Catherine is really great to her...please update soon to give us Gil's reaction to all this...great story! |