You made me cry. It was such an emotional story that it's probably one of the saddest story I've ever read. Thank you for writing it, I very much enjoyed it.

:3 i love your ash/gary pairings! you do an excellent job with it! hehe its also one of my favorite pairings!

This story made me cry.

Aw poor Ash! That's so sad. But your writing style is awsome! Good story! Keep it up!

That was very good! Keep writing them and may they be even more depressing, sad, and tear striken...!

I want to cry *sobs*.WAH!*cries loudly*

(Applause) Congratulations, you have made an amazing piece of art, the ending really made me cry with deep tears.

Wow...that was really good

...that was really sad...

this was really good. made me cry...

After reading your story... I wanna cry! Ash no die! I realised who it was once you mentioned that his best friend was Gary. Farely obvious at that point... for me anyway. Other then all that, it was a good story. Expertly written. I wanted to... I wanted to cry! Damnit... sorry. I have to go cry now...

Woah that was amazing =O

dang it, i haven't readd this story in i don't know how long and i always end up crying. i've read this story like 15 times and every time i cry. it's good and sad and one of the few of my favorites i have on this site

**...this was depressing. Loved it, went well with the hormone and fanfiction-induced depression I have dug myself into. Thanks.

I LOVED the ending! So much sadness...grief...regret...so awesome...I hope more of these kinds of stories appear! Keep up the good work! ^^