As I said over at Muse Bunny, this is incredible. It really draws you in and leaves you craving for more, and that kind of hold is hard to find in any story, fanfic or original published work.

The history is accurate and presented in an interesting way. You've intertwined said history and culture with the original order of the Gundam Wing universe quite beautifully.

All in all, this story easily makes my top five list. Amazing work and I can't wait to devour more of this!

Oh, this story is really good. I like the way you've managed to come up with reasonable explanations for the personalities that fit well into the time period. Your reasearch also shows in that you make it believable without it feeling like a history lecture. I look foward to your next update.

This story is written very well!! I'm really enjoying it, especially since I am a history major and absolutely love stories revolving around ancient Rome. Keep up the good work!!

Man this was excellently written!! And your research was mindblowing.. you even pulled out facts taht I didnt' recognize and I'm a ancient lord junkie lol.

I definitely look forward to the sequel... I'm hoping we might see a family reunion for Zechs perhaps? (while I know it's not a popular opinion, I do like Relena.. especially after she grows up a bit in the series lol)

Either way, I'll definitely be putting you on my author alert and checkin out the rest of your stories!

Yay, you're posting the sequel!

I remember learning about Germanicus in my Latin class. He sounded cool. :)

Fantastic! I've just read it for the first time, and I couldn't wait to get to the next chapter. The historical detail and the notes at the bottom were fascinating and your research has well paid off! I hope to read more soon!

-K

Nice prologue. Not that my appetite was not whetted before for more of this fic. Bring it on!

omg, poor guy. what was he suppose to let treize know? anyway, i'm brain dead at the moment but i appreciate the historical data at the end of each story. keep it up! XD

Ooh! Nice little teaser, I wonder what message he was carrying? Now I'm even more excited for the sequel! Oh, and not a bad piece for being unbeta'd ;)

Well fudge! Please tell me that you'll have the next chapter up sooner and let it be longer...Is the other story up yet or that just what is to come? Hope to read more soon! Cheers!!

Bloodfire87

please please please follow up on this story!I read it first a long time back and still love it!...plz continue this story!...

Great story, i love how you have historic facts at the end to back up what you have written. The story flowed so nicely and the characters really fit in the places you made them.

I love this! Hope to see the next enstallment soon!

Hi!

I hope I don´t annoy you but this comment will be a little bit "strange". Why strange?! Well, one year ago I had the idea to write a Gundam Wing fanfiction which takes place in ancient Rome.

Meanwhile the first part is finished and I´m writing the second part of it. Just like you. (By the way the story is in German. Therefore you propably won´t know about it. ;) But you´ll see it on my author page. )
Accidentially I found your story yesterday and was very curious what YOU did with the G-Boys, Zechs and Treize. And there are a few similarities! But in my story the G-Boys are not all slaves. Heero and Quatre are tribuni militari, Treize a legatus. Together they fight in Germania and "meet" Zechs. Wufei is a foreign embassador of Seres who lives in Rome. And Trowa and Duo... yes, they are slaves. ;)

Are you interested in some emailing? Just to share some thoughts and possibilities for plots, further characters and such. Some details from research. Yes, I also do some excessive research for my fanfiction.

I would be very pleased to hear from you.
Regards,
Tatheya

this was really good and I can't beleive all the research you did for it. I liked the characters of the boys and there different life styles and how you made Zechs and Trieze kindly to them. really good I hope you write more with this cause I would love to read it