Awesome! LUVED IT! There were very few mistakes, despite not being proofread! ;P Tee hee! XD I luv Halloween...so...much...SUGAR!
Luv,
Lightkit
SUGAR! XD

Col!

I was too nervous to say this before, but I LOVE this story!

Cute! I'm not really a fan of Breeze and Holly, but your skills in writing are awesome! Do other couples too!

That was really good! You make it seem Erin Hunter wrote it herself!
=3 Spottedpool

Congratulations. 8D A year later, I still love the fic (and the pairing).

Thank you so much for giving me a new ship. I always make sure to put it on my semi-serious favorites list.

Loved it!
The last sentnce however felt slightly...incomplete? I'd tweak the wording around a little; give the oneshot a more finished feel.
Adding this to favs!

lol

That was funny. It was a bit long for a one chapter story, but I liked it anyway. Keep on writing!

I really loved this. I think Breezepaw's gray, though. Oh, and if you believe in the Leaf+Crow=Jay/Holly/Lion theory, they can't fall in love with each other. XD Oh, yeah, Twoleg and Twolegplace are capitalized. [/perfectionism]

oh. that was cool. i dont really have an opinion on pairings, but breezepaw and hollypaw was a good pairing for this fic. :)

Not half bad, my paring of choice is BreezeXsomeone else.
-SC*

I KNEW IT! BREEZE-X-HOLLY! It's good, but they wouldn't know what bottles or costumes are. Crack pairings rule!!
--Cloudfire