Wow toph just wow you know you could have finished your sentens

it sounded like toph

need more to it

LMAO .. oh poor Aang.

And how descriptive did GranGran get .. maybe as descriptive as my mom *shudders*

Wow toph. And wow aang and katara. YOu shouldn't be talking about that around a person younger than you.

very funny! good job. i loled! (my sister likes it too. i think that you guys must be on the same wavelength...)

lmao! that was so funny! poor aang!

HALARIOUS!

Okay wow, that was hilarious xD I almost wish it was longer. D'x

LOL! I LOVED THIS!

That was perfect! Very well done! Everything flows well, the lines make it easier to read... not to mention that the story itself was hilarious! Especially the part at the end... LOL!

Let me know if you need help with the next chapter.

I really didnt expect this! Thought she was going to confess her crush or something :)

Its an interesting humorous piece, though one that will sadly not be seen on the airwaves :( I liked how you kept mostly to dialog when writing, since the main theme was "the talk" which i found was a good touch. Its hard to say whether something here was in character, due to the theme of it, but "IF" they were to have it, i think its natural for Toph not knowing what said thing was, as well as the reactions of all the other characters towards her. Really cute all in all, if a somewhat perverted but at the same time innocent manner :)

This story's very funny!

OMG thats great poor Toph is probably scared for life and aang is about to die LOL

-Megi

“What. Is. Sex.”

*laughing hysterically* Holy cow, that is funny! Oh, and then Sokka jumping to conclusions... Perfect characterization! Absolutely rip roaring hilarious!

One or two grammar things: put punctuation, like periods or commas, inside any quotes (ex., "The Talk". - "The Talk."), try using less exclamation points and question marks (just one or three if you really feel like you need it get the point across just as well as twenty), and "scared" is "scarRed." But besides those relatively minor details, really beautifully done! Two thumbs up!

Keep writing! Therese