Oh boy. I read this first, what, almost a year ago? And I liked it, because it was good and intersting. Then I went searching for W/C fic today and found this, read the first 3 lines and thought 'I remember this one'. So, great job, and I'm glad I re-found this one-shot that left such an impression on me.

great job. the summary was right on the money.

I like this, really. The funny thing is, I thought it was charlie going to willy's bed, not the other way around.

Oh that was simply perfect! And that little twist at the end! Wow *fav*

Wow. Your descriptions were very tasteful, and beautiful as well.

You really had me going, too! I'm a little sad to find, after reading this story's reviews, that people aren't fully understanding your twist, but it was great.

I even reread it, this time with Charlie in my head as the narrator-you had me convinced it was Wonka til the revelation at the end.

I wish all PWP were as much of a rewarding experience as this.

Anyway, I very much enjoyed it, as you may have gathered, but I figured I should say so expressly. ^_^

Wow. I just... Wow.

Am I correct to assume it is Willy who sneaks into Charlie's bed? I really, really liked this. I love how you write these to characters.. Wonderful.

I really did think It was Willy speaking at first I pictured it Willy in me head speaking Charlie being the nervous figure in the bed! Dammit, you got me! XD

I love it when story's do that, thankyou. ^^

I really love how you don't explicitly say who the other is... It's clear from the story without having to say and that gives it just that little extra. Also the way they explore while knowing when to stop... love it. nice read as always =D

OMG I love this and every CATCF story b/c Johnny's wonka reminds me of my love, Michael Jackson! :D I'd always wanted to write a story like that with Michael...

very enjoyable. lovely characterization and well written

[quote]We specialize in fantasy, but this, is intensely real.[/quote] I love this line. Melted... I'm a puddle right now and it' quite hard to press the keyboard buttons as you know... He he.. Sweet sweet reality..

*dies from blood loss* KAWAII!

I am not a lurker >/>

Well done! Your style is strikingly mature -- very nice.

wow
that was great! I loved the way you wrote it.
great fic
you did an awesome, great terrific fantastic job at writing it.

i can't belive you only have 1 more review on this. thath's crazy.

bravo!