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| Sun Dragon Sorceror 2008-08-25 ch 15,  | abuseI thoroughly enjoyed this. I almost wish the director would make a movie along these lines. The "gang theme" would work perfectly in a JC movie. Good luck on getting it published. I'm sure people will buy it. |
| Mistress of Baneful Terminu... 2008-08-22 ch 14, | abuseBy the way, if this comes out in print, I'll be sure to get a copy! :) |
| Mistress of Baneful Terminu... 2008-08-22 ch 15, | abuseGREAT ending! It's so nice to see people in this section who can actually WRITE with a PLOT and stay with it! lol, you don't know how happy it makes me when people finish what they write and actually do an awesome job with it. Now, this epilogue has me wondering...will you be writing any more? I hope so! |
| redplanetes 2008-08-20 ch 15, | abuseIf I didn't tell you before... THIS STORY IS GREAT!! It truly made my day to see you back, and the story completed. I've been waiting, hoping, yearning for the rest of the story. It deserves to be in print - heck, on FILM - but I'm so glad you posted the rest here. I'd have gladly given an arm and a leg, maybe a kidney or even an eyeball, to find out what happened. Excellent action, and the ending is perfect! |
| Mistress of Baneful Terminu... 2008-08-18 ch 6, | abuseAre you ever going to update? I've yet to see this in a store... |
| redplanetes 2007-12-01 ch 6, | abuseThis is a fantastic story, bravo! Action-filled, suspenceful, and genuinely scary. Your characterization of the Creeper is so dead-on perfect. 'There was something in his stance, though, that sucked the confidence out of Durrell’s chest.' 'Weaponless and alone, the figure under the hat paralyzed them with his defiance. He stretched an arm behind himself and shoved the van door closed...The man in the hat suddenly stepped forward, heading straight for them with quick paces.' 'A boogeyman who has a knack for knitting, no less.' I loved the scene in Ch 4 when Durrell discovers the sewn-up wound in his belly. THAT...was creepy. You have my admiration, my envy, and my fanhood. Please keep writing this story; I'll definitely keep reading. |
| Mistress of Baneful Terminu... 2007-11-17 ch 3, | abusenice job so far |