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Miss DnG
2008-01-07
ch 1,
abuseVery sweet :)
amy
2007-12-26
ch 1, anon.
abuselove this stoary! thank you!!
kodiaqkitten
2007-12-19
ch 1,
abuseExcellent.
I enjoyed this story so much.
Keep up the great work.
Tairi Soraryu
2007-12-10
ch 1,
abuseCute! Sousuke Sagara, English major. Great job!
'.'.'.Jesslca'.'.'.
2007-11-13
ch 1,
abuse"Oh yes. Thank you. Good Answer." Haaha
Silly Sousuke and his military way of thinking made me laugh, you write so well!
NefCanuck
2007-11-12
ch 1,
abuseGood god, who knew that doing a crossword puzzle could turn into a contact sport? (Or should that be "combat sport" in the case of one clueless Mithril operative? LOL)

Wonderful stuff again, my compliments, you really have a flair for the Kaname & Sousuke dynamic
meeiwen
2007-11-09
ch 1,
abuseyay sweet! ^-^
anonymous jane
2007-11-07
ch 1, anon.
abuseonce you said beautiful six letters, i somehow knew it was going to be kaname (once i counted) i admire you for coming up with so many crossword puzzle clues and answers. i'm not good at those so i could never do that. thank you so much for writing cute sosuke and kaname stories. the world needs wayy more!
junyortrakr
2007-11-05
ch 1,
abuseIt looks like he might live a little longer after that last answer. Of course, he's likely to do something to offset that soon, but it's good while it lasts.
Arnoldstrife
2007-11-05
ch 1,
abuseAh so great! you always can capture Sousuke's personality and Kaname's Response so well. Very sweet!
RanDooM VII
2007-11-04
ch 1,
abuseThe story is really great. It captures the wit and humor you would expect to find in FMP. Though I find Sagara's ignorance to be a wee bit extreme. Keep up the good work!! I'll be waitin' for more great stories!!
Rose1948
2007-11-03
ch 1,
abuseHow sweet!
Akalee-chan
2007-11-03
ch 1,
abuseswet!^^
Sousukes-Girl
2007-11-03
ch 1,
abuseAww, how sweet! I was hoping it was gonna be something like that.

Sg
BlueLion
2007-11-03
ch 1,
abuseSuddenly, like an abrupt sea-change, the blue-haired girl through out one opinion in favor of ...
Make that:
Suddenly, like an abrupt sea-change, the blue-haired girl threw out one opinion in favor of a newer on ...

Very good plot, with a romantic end ...
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