beautiful finish. It starts out so simple, and so classic-Emmett, but then it ends up with a wonderful depth.

yay for Emmett!

And thanks for the distraction from novel-writing!

I love Emmett, he is so simple to please

Very nicely done! I love Emmett too :)

Aww that was so sweet!

hm, I don't know. I liked the idea of this, but if you were aiming for two hundred words than I think that you limited yourself. The sentence structure was very simple, like how a 7 year old would write. It got a little more complex, but mainly in ideas and thoughts.

It makes Emmett sound stupid, as so many fannon fics make him out to be, but he's really not... so, I don't know. I did like it.

Ah... that Emmett is a cute guy!

Wouldn't you just love a guy who would think like that about you... be grateful for everything because of you... *sigh*