Good. You did good. No doubt.

I luv It!

Plzz make another chapter.

YAY SORA KIARKI KISSY WOOT WOOT lol but im scared to read the next chapter if that means there not going to be together owell the whow MUST GO ON by the way excellent job

Oh wow! I'm very excited about this story, you have to update soon! I think I might know where you're headed with this plot, and I'm so anxious with how it's going to work out!

i already love this story! hehe

please update soon!

Good! I hope you're going to intending to update. I really liked it! You're a really good writer, I admire that. You're definately better compared to me! I applaud you! Keep writing.

Be careful with the lustful parts, I'm a bit wary about that part.

Well, I really did like this. The only complaint I really have (and this is nitpicking) is that I think you made Sora and Kairi move too fast (I think you know what I mean), but that's just my personal preferences and not really a writing flaw.

Sorry if I can't help improve your writing ability, but you're either as good or better than me when it comes to writing so it's really hard to make constructive critisism.

wow, REALLY great story!please continue!

Dude please update soon! i need to know what will happen between sora and kairi! :( enough said