For a first-time story, you made quite an excellent showing of how the new recruit came on so nervous. I give it 5 stars out of 5!

This was fantastic! Again, an interesting idea - and incredibly funny! Well done - you really pulled it off considering it's your first! :D

What an interesting idea! I can definitely see DM starting out as Colonel K's assistant - and that would explain why he's so tolerant of poor Penfold. I love it! Hope there's more where this came from.