A cute story. X3 You're right, the Tsubasa gang are like a family and you did a great job on showing that through Fay's perspective. Good word choice.

Corrections:

"A light wind blew, blowing dying leaves from the branches and around the blonde mand walking through the grove of trees." It's man.

"With his hands tucked deep into his pockets, his blue jacked zipped up against the chilly breeze, Fay breathed in the autumn air of this new world they had arrived in earlier that day." I believe it's jacket.

"So he had experience a fake death." I believe it's have experienced.

"It was a peaceful world, which came as a relief to the travelling group, yet despite the peace, Fay was stilled disturbed." I believe it's still.

"...every single memory he could possibly remeber flashes through his mind's eye, and the next moment, all is still." It's remember.

"...the last time he had though about love was..." It's thought.

"Kurogane, who always worked hard to maintain that strong, gruff persona, was asleep on the couch, a copy of the manga he always bought in every world in his left hand, which rested on his lap. " I believe it's brought.

"Mokona was perched atop Syaoran's head, snoring soft "Puu"'s in it's sleep." Its.

"As he grabbed a few and headed towards the group, a guilty feeling spread through him as he imagined his friend's reactions at his "death" in Outo." Shouldn't it be friends'?

"Kurogane stirred and muttered something inaudible as Fay tucked a red-and-black checkered blanket around the ninja, and Fay resited the urge to chuckle out loud." It's resisted.

Aw! That's so kawaii! And seriously, if anyone but CLAMP owned Tsubasa, it a) wouldn't be as angsty awesome, and b) Kurogane and Fai (Yuui?) would be canon!

The end line is so corny but I love it! After all, with what's goin' on now, we need some of taht sweet corniness to dilute teh angst!

I'm a huge Fai fanirl too, so I love seeing Fai drabbles. Don't support KuroxFai though.

aw kawai!!

I loved this story so much. It was sweet and cute and I wish there was more of it! Wonderful job :)

aw, i loved this story so much! So sad and so sweet.
He finally has people who love him,and a ninja who loves him. ;)
GREAT job,really good!

Oh, Fay. So much pretty angst.

I love your oneshots, they're to the point and when it hits, it is oh so sweet. XD

(just a few typos, you might want to fix them)


Good work.

Aww... it was sweet of what Fai thinks of them, the first time in his life to know how to love. It makes me think of Fai's good transformation in Nihon arc.