Your description of Stan is just to die for! *swoons* You make him UTTERLY gorgeous! Oh, wow. Great personality in this fic--makes the story lively! Anyway, awesome start! Please update soon! 8D

Nice one. I don't really get the title though.

I liked that last line. You really have a way with words.
Now I just wish your chapters were longer.

But if the title is in reference to the song of that same name, then... meh. I don't like the song.

Keep it up!

your writing style is really good..
i envy you and the perfect way you describe Stan! xD
*cough*updatesoon*cough*
;]

I like it so far ^ ^ update soon ^ ^

omg!! that was so beautiful!! :) i cant wait till next chapter!!

An excellent start, I would suggest that you put 'AU' in the summary to avoid confusion. You have a unique writing style that got me hooked with the first sentence and I'm excited to see where you are going with this.
-Casa

Interesting so far, nice description of Stan, I can imagine him pretty clearly!
Hehe, seems like, love at first for Kyle, I wonder if it'll be the same for Stan ;)

Update soon :)