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Strings of a Puppet
2008-04-02 . chapter 4
I'M GETTING ADDICTED...and you know what was most disappointing? I was ready to click on the next chapter and alas...I FOUND NONE.

I know you're busy, but how are your plans for this story going? (batters eyelashes)

I luv you layla-chan...
Strings of a Puppet
2008-04-02 . chapter 3
OMG! ...HE FINALLY SHOWED SOME EMOTION FOR THAT!? Well, it is a blessing and all but POOR SAKURA-CHAN!
Strings of a Puppet
2008-04-02 . chapter 2
O.O

HOLY CRAP! ANGST! ANGST! ANGST!

(I'm gonna have to start calling you Angst!Layla-chan...lame I know)

SASUKE IS A BASTARD!
Strings of a Puppet
2008-04-02 . chapter 1
INTERESTING PROLOGUE! I wonder how you're gonna fit sasusaku into that...
Lyrics and Music
2008-02-01 . chapter 4
I absolutely adore this story. I really wonder why you don't get more reviews. It's splendid. Update soon.

~Yuki-chan
A.k.A. MoonlightSnow
Miko-chan
2008-01-01 . chapter 4
XDD WAA! Kakashi! THE BABYSITTER!

But still, this fanfic made my heartache, because Sasuke, the ever emotionally-stunted bastard, decided to wrap his arms to Sakura when she was already pregnant?! GAH! YOU'RE HOPELES, SASUKE-KUN.

Haha, I know it'll be hard to write Sakura pregnant, bu the fact that the pregnancy would be the catalyst for some emotions in Sasuke. XD YAY!

Will wait patiently for updates! XD
Kyuubi-Legend
2007-12-22 . chapter 1
great
mint poppies
2007-12-22 . chapter 3
I find this interesting, but are you aware that chapter 4 is the same as chapter 3?
Sagitarious Devil
2007-11-11 . chapter 4
I love flashbacks. Everything was so cute and adorable.
I really can't wait for your next update!
*Dev
AGENT Kuma-chan
2007-11-11 . chapter 4
...ahh...childhood...how i miss thee...
sasuke, if you never showed any appeciation before, don't expect that to be welcome now. after all...if one gets used to now affection, and then you suddenly show it, WHAT IS SAKURA SUPPOSED TO THINK!!
...I'm surprised she's still with you...
...you better try to make up for all that you've done, before it's too late...
like if she dies during childbirth...or gets critically hurt during that time...
avalache1
2007-11-11 . chapter 4
that was the best chapter yet. their sweet childhood brings back memories of my childhood. those lovely carefree days.
Sagitarious Devil
2007-11-10 . chapter 3
Great story! I only wish the chapters were a little longer.
But anyway! I can't wait until your next update!
*Dev
Sagitarious Devil
2007-11-10 . chapter 1
I don't understand why people haven't been checking out this story! It's amazing! I love it! It's kind of poetic.

Anyway, I'll continue reading.
*Dev
AGENT Kuma-chan
2007-11-09 . chapter 3
...ahh...progress...SASUKE IS HUGGING!
...Maybe a fan-girl accidently hit his head...
or maybe he is actually happy (and doesn't really know what to do with that feeling) and is trying to (in a completely anti-social and unusual way) show it.
I think I go witht the fan-girl hitting his head.

...and sakura, enjoy it while you can.
avalache1
2007-11-06 . chapter 2
why diid you have to make a cliffe. oh well. it was great can't wait till the next chaapter
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