The entire story, I was predicting it, but it still made me cry. Good story and very well written.

Aww I loved this, poor cloud I liked how you didn't actually say it was Aeris and it was sad when she cried. But was it because of the state he was in or was it because he asked her to go to Edge and she knew she couldn't? But the ending said everything it needed towhen he realized that she'd been with him through it all. It made me teary eyed at the ribbon and the material from her dress smelling of flowers and blood, all in all a lovely piece of writing.

This is an absolutely beautiful piece, you did a wonderful job writing it.

Not really as good as the one in Clock, but what the heck? It made me feel a really good rush of emotion.

Such a good fic! ^_^

Lovely sap. You write Aeris so well as the spiritual guardian.

I'm not even a CloudxAeris fan, yet this story touched my heart. It was so beautiful, and perfect the way you kept her identity a secret. One of the most skillful writings I've seen in a while.

Nice. Pretty good writing, barring the odd tense slip or mistake. I didn't notice until Cloud mentioned his family, but then it immediately struck me as odd that he hadn't thought of them before. He seems a little too dismissive about them to me... I think he ought to care a bit more.

Pure Excellence. Your writing is superb and demonstrates exceptional skill. I just love this story.. so bittersweet.

Absolutely lovely. I don't think anything else I can say will suffice, but trust me it was *beautiful*! I love the supernatural feel to Aerith, actually, I didn't think it was her at first,only some woman who reminded Cloud of her :) But the ending and Cloud's realization almost brought me to tears!
The Cleris fandom is lucky to have you ;)

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This fic just blows any and every Clorith fic I have ever written out of the water. I don't really know what to say except that this was amazingly beautiful, romantic, and heartbreaking all at once. So original, too. I've never read anything quite like this before . . .

Excuse my language, but you are a ** GENUIS.

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I love this one-shot.
By the way, I also LOVE your other story, "Clock."

This story was packed with a lot of substance. There was the vivid use of language and word combination. Besides that, the whole plot itself and the development of the events can evoke quite many thoughts and emotions. I guess the underlying theme of this fic would be to count your blessings during the rough times? Yeah.

Thank you for a wonderful fic!
Keep up the great work!

OMG. OMG!

I... I...

Why does this not have more reviews?!!

OMG. Nesza. I'm Lynn, the one who suggested "salvation" as a theme for the Cleris 100 Themes. Honestly, when I did that, Clorith and I were content with making corny sentences about Cloud eating flowers or starving for love or something.

But you... this fic! OMG. It takes Skill to turn our corny theme into such an amazing, and you have Skill in COPIOUS amounts. I mean, like, WHOOSH, a fricking flood! I am just blown away. Oh, it's SO dark, and my heart totally broke for Cloud when he lost his hands!

I don't think it's odd that he never realised who She was. Sometimes you don't notice things you don't expect to see. And sometimes you just can't see certain things, something in the air and in the mind makes you completely blind, save for a shadow in your memory.

...Goodness. My goodness. I bow to your Awesome. You ROCK.

Thanks for the lovely story :)

I lurve the way you did'nt say it was Aeris through the story... yep enough said, I loved it well done ^.^ *faves*