 Azzandra 2009-08-22 . chapter 6The Romanian is actually a bit off. "Savuros nimic" actually means "tasty nothing". I think it should be "bucăţică savuroasă" instead. And "my tasty morsel" in chapter 6 should be "bucăţica mea savuroasă", because "mei" means "my" when a single person talks about male, plural objects while "mea" is "mine" for singular, female objects (and also, adjectives usually go AFTER the noun, except in cases where they don't. Romanian is one of those language crafted for the sole purpose of confounding foreigners and, occasionally, even native speakers. It is an EVIL language, doubly so when you're trying to make heads or tails of its grammar.)
I'm not sure if "my dear pet" was meant to be in Romanian at all, because the phrase you used made no sense in the language. And, to be frank, I don't think there's a Romanian equivalent for it. Something affectionate and mildly patronising? The only thing that comes in mind is "dear girl", which would be "fată dragă", which sounds a bit more old-fashioned in Romanian than in English.
At any rate, I've been reading the entire CATverse and I feel a bit bad that the first time I bother to review, it's only to lecture you about language. It's terrible of me, isn't it?
But thank you for all the entertainment all of you have provided and thank you for that time I laughed so hard I had to go to another room so I wouldn't asphyxiate. Thank you for your persistance in writing all these stories and I hope you will get around to finishing all the fics. I also wish you luck in all your future projects and I appologise for not taking the time to review before now. |
 Teh Soul Cookie 2009-04-09 . chapter 6Awesome! I think that the Captian's reaction was a perfectly natural one to a vampire. Either they turn you or they die. Simple really. *ponders* Maybe i should carry around a stake up my sleeve and go searching for vampries at film festivals... Anyways! This and all your stories are awesome! keep up the great work! (I feel i've said that before...) |
 kittydemon18 2009-03-05 . chapter 6absolutely brilliant, little sad about the hints that the girls are getting older but still, fantastic
and i am probably definately going to go out and either find or make a t-shirt that says "if reality wants to get in touch, it knows where i am" that line is perfect
also loving how this ended, nicely done |
 invisiblehand 2008-12-22 . chapter 5please, PLEASE tell me you did NOT just mix MARVEL with DC!? its just asking for trouble! |
 WhySoSerious1992 2008-11-23 . chapter 5lol squishums likes teh snickerdoodles XD |
 Jane-Martin 2008-11-21 . chapter 5“I expect a dozen snickerdoodles for this.”
xD Squishy's love of cookies is always amusing. |
 Twinings 2008-11-20 . chapter 4By the way, I keep meaning to tell you, fire knife dancing doesn't work that way.
Lurve!
-3.0 |
 Twinings 2008-11-20 . chapter 5*giggle giggle*--*bursts into tears*
Aw, I miss you. And the midnight rambles.
“Shells are in the kitchen. Rock salt’s in the bathroom.”
I'm going to go ahead and assume that my first response shouldn't have been, "Why would it be in the bathroom?"
I like this chapter. You've definitely hit your stride again.
And now that I think about it, there are vampires in the DC universe...one of them was at Squishy's bachelor party, talking to Squidjums and the Werewolf. But I guess Squishy might not know what he is.
-3.0 |
 Ninjallerina 2008-11-20 . chapter 5Absolutely hilarious, as per usual! I died at "some from the TV, some from lab" part.
As a general note, I'd just like to say that I've been reading The CATverse for years now and there has yet to be a day where reading any of the stories fails to make me feel better.
Awesome job!
~Ninjallerina |
 Jane-Martin 2008-10-28 . chapter 4*yay! update!*
coolness, flamey knife dancing! stupid Firefly...
wow, language lesson! yay!
Great chapter, looking forward to more! |
 HurriCanine 2008-10-26 . chapter 4*does the yay!update-dance*
Oh how I /do/ love a man with a good, thick accent. :D Preferrably British.
-- Canis |
 Teh Soul Cookie 2008-09-03 . chapter 3:D lol!! 'we follow the nearest path of flamey death' lawl!! XD |
 Firefly4000 2008-04-07 . chapter 3Wonderful story lol poor poor Techie lol |
 Protector of Canon2 2008-01-29 . chapter 3Ah yes, follow the fire to Captain.
That usually works. |
 E. Nagrom 2008-01-29 . chapter 3He he he great update really bought down the house (arg spending to much time with younger cousins :s).
Hmm yeah Johnathon would have given her the antidote in 3-4 mellenia :)
E. |