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| XxstraysinxX 2008-07-24 ch 5, anon. | abusei really luv this story...cant wait for chapter 7...keep up tha gr8 work i'll b waiting :) |
| takjimcin5 2008-06-30 ch 5, anon. | abuseits been 4 freaking year when are you going to update!?!?!?!?!?! |
| Joe 2008-05-28 ch 5, anon. | abuseThe story is magnifiecent! but it was out of place for him to be able to make a fire...it's just not possible. |
| Larfang 2008-05-05 ch 5, anon. | abuseyes! I have been waiting for you to update! O whats going to happen next? |
| XxwolfiexX 2008-05-04 ch 5, anon. | abusei'm loving the story cant wait for chapter 6...thax for the AWESOME story...keep it up! |
| Fan Boy 101 2008-04-23 ch 5,  | abuseNice one! Looking foward to the next chapter. |
| Dubblez-L-5 2008-04-23 ch 5, | abuseoh! Update soon plz! |
| midnightsprite 2008-04-13 ch 4, | abusePoor Audi! Steele's mean but cool at the same time, wot! Write more!! |
| XxwolfiexX 2008-04-12 ch 4, anon. | abusethax 4 finally working on the story cant wait 4 chapter 5 |
| Fan Boy 101 2008-04-10 ch 4, | abuseWow. Awesome chapter, despite it being short. Please update soon. |
| Dubblez-L-5 2008-04-10 ch 4, | abuseOMG, update! I ttly love this sdtory, its SO creative! |
| ivan 2008-03-31 ch 1, anon. | abusedont type me you gave up this fanfic...its awesome..keep working on it :( |
| ivan 2008-03-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseloving the story hope u finish it but please take ur time on it |
| Midnyte Wolf 2008-03-03 ch 3, | abuseI have to admit this is an all too interesting idea, which is what lured me in (and kept me here for all three chapters). You did a pretty good job. There were a few things that made me stop and do a double take, in regards to making sense, a few things that made me want to run it through a spell checker, and a few word choices I wish you would have used sparingly. Overall, it wasn't too bad - meaning, if you updated, I'd probably come back and read more (also meaning I may draw fanart :3). |
| midnightsprite 2007-12-29 ch 3, | abuseA! YAY! MORE STORY! I love this story, it's interesting. Go you! |