That was really sweet!

^.^

It's so cute! aw...The whole Pride thing is creepy...BUT IT SEEMS AMAZING...U should totally update...

Nice story but you really need to beta it, or get someone to do it for you. There were parts on which I got confused because of the grammatical errors.

Other then that, good story.

This is so cute! I love it!

It's so fluffy I could smack my brother upside the head with it.

Wonderful take on this. I love it. The whole going to Mustang's apartment thing. Great work!

Erinn~