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| Mr. Ite 2007-11-04 ch 1,  | abuseNice. Loved that last one. Noah is my favorite character, you've written him well. Good job. |
| Riana1 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abuseChilling and bitterly real. |
| Lady Celestia17 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abuseExcellent job at expanding and deepening a character that's ofter overlooked here. Brilliant work. |
| Revan's Pet Duck 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abuseThis is certainly a good one. You don't go too in-depth, which can get irritating, but you don't restrain yourself to listing only the actions. The snippets fit well together, the past affecting every one of them. I enjoyed your fic. Good job. :) |