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evanescenceangel18
2009-06-12 . chapter 1
Wow this story was amazing. Hahahaha i wish I had a super smokin hot stepbrother that would play that kinda prank with me... just playing. But seriously this was an amazing story and I totally loved it. Love ya forever and ever. XD
amongstheliving
2009-05-09 . chapter 1
that. was. AWESOME. :) they were very in-character the entire time and it was very well written. nice job :)
melissaxerzi
2009-04-23 . chapter 1
OMG!
I totally liked it!
Good Job.

-melissa
NormalPerson
2009-04-21 . chapter 1
Wow, you need help, this is a little in depth for a family channel show. You need to get a life!
Monsterchild
2009-02-13 . chapter 1
Nicely done. Well written.
itsi3
2009-01-10 . chapter 1
Awsome!
Great job!
~Crystal
Kaishi-chan
2008-06-30 . chapter 1
Great Job.
XD
twilight4ever24
2008-03-20 . chapter 2
i liked it
Silverian Rose
2008-01-27 . chapter 2
it's been a while since i last read it, but reading it under new revision, have to say that was hot damn, oh la la, steamy... and i'm done with my adjectives to describe that...
loved it and hope you write other steamy goodies...
chinkybaby
2008-01-26 . chapter 1
intense! XD
princetongirl
2008-01-26 . chapter 2
loved it update soon
DDDDD-Separated
2008-01-26 . chapter 1
I feel it very important to tell you that this is the first het sex that hasn't made me cringe in a long time...it was awesomely hot! Good job all around!
xXCrimsonRosesXx
2008-01-26 . chapter 1
Wow, this is so good. I don't really know what else to say expect great job.
Ebb
2008-01-24 . chapter 1
wow this was really good don't be so hard on yourself. It was very cute how Casey thought he was joking and thought she was turning things around...plus the sex was, to put it bluntly, hot. There was just one thing that irked me about it, and that was the use of the adjectives glistening, delicious, and luscious. Maybe it's just a matter of personal preferances/me being obsessive complusive about everything, but those seemed a bit excessive. Other than that tiny little thing, great oneshot.
Lanter
2008-01-08 . chapter 1
Cool one-shot.
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